In recent days, we have to face I problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ________(说明A的现状.Second, ________(举例进一步说明现状 Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ________(解决方法一. For another ________(解决方法二. Finally, ________(解决方法三.
Personally, I believe that ________(我的解决方法. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(带来的'好处.
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真是的,就算一定得搭野鸡车,也应该睁大眼睛啊,居然司机一说是回头车我就上了,说载不载都无所谓,我就让他开。为什么我当时没有考虑到旅途的安全问题呢?报纸上几乎天天有计程车司机在荒郊野外劫财劫色,甚至还要伤人的报道,为什么我这么大意?
果然,车子刚过中坜吧,我就感到异样了。就如同我前面所说,司机一再从后视镜瞅我,瞅得我心底发毛。当然,我身上的钱不多,又是一个大男生,实在不必害怕。不过,如果他真的心怀恶意,如果他嫌钱太少不满意,无论如何,还是我吃亏。我悄悄打量他的体型,没有我高,但是比我结实多了。虽然单打独斗,我未必就会输他,可是他不可能没带东西,而且我根本不想打。
就在这时候,我看到他的右手从方向盘挪开,往下伸,不知在摸什么东西,大概是扁钻或刀子吧?车窗外一片漆黑,正是苗粟一带的山间,歹徒下手最理想的所在。要动手了吧?我下意识坐直身子,冷汗开始往外冒。
什么事也不曾发生,他的手又伸了上来,放在方向盘上,没有拿什么东西。一定是他看出我有了戒备,不敢轻率下手,在等待更恰当的时机吧?难道我就这样束手待毙吗?也许我可以想想办法,化解这场危机。我不是一向自诩最善于动脑筋的吗?怎么突然吓呆了呢?或许我可以试着和他聊聊天,动之以情,让他不好意思动手。
于是我吞了口口水,和他搭讪:
“生意好吗,老乡?”
他似乎吓了一跳,过了好几秒钟才回答我:
“不好啊!几乎连油钱都跑不回来。”
“不会吧?你不是回头车?刚刚还有客人包了你的车去台北,不是吗?”
他不再回答。我突然想到可能不是真的回头车,一紧张,舌头打结,也沉默下来。沉默最适于培养紧张的气氛。为什么他不跟我聊天呢?是不是怕暴露他的口音或其他的特征,增加警方缉捕他的可能?他当然明白,我被抢之后必定会去报案的,好聪明狡猾的.家伙!我恨恨地咬了咬牙,他又从后视镜飞快地掠了我一眼。
这一眼非常狠毒,我有生以来不曾看过比这更狠毒的眼神,使我再度直冒冷汗,再度后悔自己的莽撞。即使赶不回员林上课,请一天假又有什么大不了,何必一定要搭野鸡车冒险?
算了,如果他真的要抢,就给他吧!好汉不吃眼前亏,财物嘛,生不带来死不带去,有人要就给他,犯不着因此打斗伤身。可是再想想,不行!这么一来,岂不是助长了恶人的气焰?无论如何,都应该和他拼斗一番,给他一点教训。
两种想法交战缠斗,还没有分出胜负,员林居然到了。可爱的员林!当计程车在公路局车站前一停,我立刻打开车门,冲了下去。松了一口气,才想到还没付钱,便绕过车后,走到司机窗口,伸手到旅行袋里掏钱。突然,车子往前冲,迅速拐一个弯,消失在不远的街角上。我最后看到的,是司机无比惊惶的神色。
怔怔地站在凌晨两点左右冷冷清清的员林街头,莫名其妙地把车钱再放入旅行袋,才看见旅行袋的右方开口突出一截枪管。那是我在台北特地为孩子买回来的玩具枪,枪管太长,无法全部塞进旅行袋里。
解读启示:
主题设立:我搭出租车,以为司机不怀好意,误以为司机是劫财劫色的贼人;司机看到我旅行袋里露出的玩具枪枪管,又误以为我是贼人,最后连车钱都不敢要就溜走了。文章通过两人的误会,入骨三分地表现了台湾当时的社会现实,揭示了人性间爱猜疑、互不信任的丑陋主题。全文气氛沉重,是一种冷峻的黑色幽默。
情节设计:
(1)确定描写易引起误会的事情、人物:“我”和司机。
(2)情节设计:“因末班火车已开走,我只好搭出租车。”
交代起因,是“起””;
“司机一再从后视镜瞅我,瞅得我心底发毛。我误以为他有不良想法。”
接上文,是“承”
“到苗粟一带山间,司机右手从方向盘挪开,往下伸,大概拿扁钻或刀子吧?要动手了吧?我下意识坐直身子,冷汗开始往外冒。可没有发生什么事。”
是“承”,也是“转”;
“我试着和他聊天,以打消他的念头。他似乎吓了一跳,过了好几秒钟才回答我。是不是怕暴露他的口音或其他的特征,增加警方缉捕他的可能?好聪明狡猾的家伙。”
气氛由舒缓——紧张——舒缓——紧张,是“承”“转”;
“他又从后视镜飞快地掠了我一眼。这一眼非常狠毒,我有生以来不曾看过比这更狠毒的眼神,使我再度直冒冷汗。”
是“转”;
“目的地到了,我还没给钱,便绕过车尾,司机以为我抢劫,无比惊慌的开车走了。”气氛紧张,是“承”,“转”;“我纳闷中看见了旅行袋中露出的玩具枪枪管。我恍然大悟。”
谜底揭开,主题得以表现,是“合”。
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
尊敬的Ben先生(老板的名字:
①Please accept this letter as formal notification that I am leaving my position with XXX company on August 7.
请接受这封辞职信,我将于八月七日正式辞去我在XXX公司的职位。
③Although I have enjoyed my job, I have received an offer for another company that I feel is better suited6 to my career objectives.
虽然很喜欢日前的工作,但我已得到另一家公司提供的'更适合我事业目标的职位。
④Thank you for your kind attention and would appreciate if you could let me have a reference letter before I leave.
感谢您对我的关照,如果您能为我写一封推荐信,我将不胜感激。
⑤I regret having to resign from my position. I wish you and XXX the best of luck and future success.
很遗憾我不得不辞职。祝您和XXX公司好运相伴,未来更加兴旺发达。
⑥If I can be of any assistance during this transition, please let me know.
如果在工作交接期有需要我做的事情,请通知我。
Sincerely/Fortunately,
真诚的
(your full name
(你的全名
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
在我家,我有自己的房间,我的`房间是我私人的地方,我不用去听父母的唠叨。我喜欢在饭后呆在房间里,我会保持安静,在没有收到别人干扰的情况下去思考问题。我的房间可以让我感到安全,给予我空间去思考。我喜欢我的房间,我想要有一天去装饰下,让它看起来更加的舒适。
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