我们坐着观光车欣赏路边风景,约10分钟后下车步行。向里走不多远便是“愚公人家”景点,一片茅草屋,仿古代村舍,这里是影视剧“愚公”的拍摄基地。路边是“八卦亭”,造型寓意八卦内涵。
前行没多远,见到两座山模型,一边山体上写着王屋山,一边山体上写着太行山,摄影留念。再向前走,便是银河峡景区,峡谷内怪石嶙峋,岩石多是火山石,很有观赏价值。
峡谷内多条悬桥增添了游客兴趣,尤其是银燕桥,桥面造型独特,赋予人挑战精神。“映光潭”“卧虎滩”“中华石”“ 禹王床”是上山前的景点。山上景点便是娲皇庙,烧香还愿的地方,庙前冠有“钟灵毓秀”字样的\'大门。
去过娲皇庙之后便可下山,下山可不行,也可坐滑道,滑道每人10元,挺刺激的。做过滑道之后向下走一段路,有一片水域可再次划船,每人10元。挺刺激的。
快乐的时光总是很短暂,夕阳西下,我们就要离开这美丽的大峡谷了我们还要往回赶呢。玩了几个小时,虽然有点累,但大家都有不虚此行的感觉。有空还要来。
愉快的寒假结束了,回想起来,真的很快乐。
那天早晨,我早早起床,看到屋顶上披上了厚厚的“棉被”,玻璃窗上结了许多漂亮的晶莹剔透的“窗花”。我开心地大声呼唤:“弟弟,快起床吧!外面下雪了,我们堆个雪人吧!”
弟弟听到我的喊声,忙穿好衣服,跑到我的\'身边。爸爸笑呵呵地加入我们的行列,用手滚了一个大大的雪球,当雪人的身子。我和弟弟也不甘示弱,齐心协力滚了一个小点儿的雪球,轻轻放在大雪人的上面,做雪人的头。然后,弟弟跑到屋里,拿来了两颗黑黑的纽扣,做雪人的眼睛。爸爸把一根红萝卜拿来,当雪人的鼻子。妈妈把剪好的红红尖尖的纸做雪人的嘴巴。我找来两根树枝,当雪人的手臂。咦?雪人怎么不漂亮呢?我想啊想,终于想出了一个好主意,把红红的围巾围在雪人的脖子上,又把弟弟的帽子戴在雪人的头上。这下,我的雪人变成了美丽的“仙子”,可招人喜爱了!
“宝贝,来!我帮你们拍照,留作纪念。”我和弟弟开心地站在雪人的身旁,“咔嚓”一声,爸爸把瞬间的美丽变成了永恒的回忆。
这就是寒假中我最开心地事,盼望着下个寒假早日到来!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
这不,今天老师又让我们背课文了。这可是一个超级难的事情。我怎么背也背不好,时间一分一秒的过去了,可我只能记住两三句,经常是记住了前面,忘记了后面,要么是记住了后面,就忘记了前面,这可咋办呢?妈妈对我说:“你不要这么着急,心越急柴越湿,你先通读几遍课文,理解了课文的\'内容,然后再一句一句的记住,如果句子短的话,可以两三句一起记,最后,窜起来再记一下,要是碰到忘记的地方,再看看书,再记记,肯定会记住的。”我按照妈妈的方法,试着去记。可是,发现效果还是不怎么好。于是,妈妈又说:“记忆讲究的是方法,死记硬背是行不通的,即便你能背出来,但也很快会忘记的。其实,记忆可以有联想法,你自己试着用什么联想,印象更深刻,这样记起来既快又不太容易遗忘,你再试试看。”我又照妈妈的方法试了一下,发现好了一点,比原先记起来更容易一点了。接着,我就照这样的方法去背课文。总算谢天谢地的把这篇课文勉勉强强的背出来了。妈妈又对我说:“再多读几遍,有助于记忆,要不然,很快要忘记的。”我又照妈妈说的,又多读了几遍课文。
哦!天哪!这要命的文字,真够捉弄人的呀!
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