手是人类离不开的“工具”,是人体的一个重要组成部分。假如你没有手,就不能写字;没有手就不能发明创造;也就没有二十一世纪的我们,和种种优良的生活环境以及现代化教学设备,手在人们生活中起到十分重要的作用。这是人类之手的作用。
我妈妈的手是一双漂亮又灵巧的.手,同时也是一双能***手。她为我们家缝缝补补、洗衣做饭,这双手从来没有停过,天天早上起床就天始拖地、买菜、做早餐。白天妈妈不仅要用这双手工作挣钱,晚上还要辅导我做作业。妈妈您真辛苦!
妈妈的手,一直让我羡慕不已,她每天似乎都停不下来。她可以把一块旧桌布变成一条新围裙。妈妈的手灵巧无比,短短几分钟时间,她飞针引线就能缝好一条精美的手帕,我运动完的衣服脏得目不忍睹,可是一到妈妈手,一会儿就能变成像一条新买的一样干净。
妈妈的手还能做出许多美味可口的食物。每次看到妈妈为我准备好的食物,我就会像只小馋猫似的,手都不洗就直接去抓。
妈妈的手既灵巧又漂亮,我希望长大后也能有一双像妈妈那样能于又漂亮的手,同时也希望这双手能为国家做出更大的贡献。
我的妈妈有一双救助过无数颗牙的手。我的妈妈是一位牙科医生,她非常能干,对患者总是尽心尽力。她的手很巧,动作也很协调。有一次,妈妈给我拔牙,她先让我坐在牙科椅上,熟练地用那双灵巧的手把工具消毒。我看到那些尖尖的拔牙工具,心里害怕极了,妈妈用她那细腻的手抚摸着我的头安慰我,我感觉好了许多。妈妈左手拿口镜轻轻地拉开口角,看一看里面的情况,右手拿镊子轻轻地摇一下,然后用小棉球蘸一点麻药,拿起牙钳,她的手只轻轻一抖,一颗牙就已经下来了。另一颗牙还有点结实,妈妈只好给我打了点麻药,拿钳子用力一拔,啊,流血了,她赶紧用棉花轻轻地压住。她的动作是那么轻巧、细致。没过几天,我的新牙就长出来了。
妈妈还有一双勤劳的手。这周日我做完作业时,忽然发现刚才乱七八糟的'屋子已经变得干干净净、整整齐齐。再到客厅一看,妈妈正在擦玻璃,她的手动作很快,好像在做着高难度的杂技动作,那么脏的一大扇窗很快就窗明几净了。
妈妈还有一双灵活的手。妈妈没事时经常玩俄罗斯方块的游戏,这种游戏要求手的动作极快,我一般只能玩两、三百分,而妈妈轻而易举就能玩两、三千分。她的手动作灵活,快得令人惊奇。
这就是妈妈的手。
我,平凡不出众;我,默默无闻不大声炫耀。大家肯定以为我一无是处吧!错,我是人类顶有用的的手。
我们手在器官当中可算是佼佼者了。人们写字离不开我,吃饭离不开我,搞科学实验还离不开我,总之一句话:人们不能离开我!如果人们离开我,就不能吃饭了,那么就饿死了;如果人们离开我,就不能写字了,那么谁还能当作家出名呢;如果人们离开我,就不能搞科学实验,那么人们还怎么探索大自然和宇宙呢?虽然我的用处很大,可是用处大,使用时间就长,使用时间长,我们手就够辛苦得了。扫地是我们干,桌子是我们擦,衣服是我们洗,地板是我们拖……时间一长,我们身上长出了厚厚的.老茧,苦到没什么,苦点儿累点儿是我们心甘情愿,不过,我们有时还会做流血牺牲。比方说碗一不小心,滑落在地上,在收拾碎片时,如果不注意就会被碎片扎上手,鲜血直流,疼得我们不得了。唉!你说世界上什么保险都有,为什么没有我们手的保险呢?真是太不公平了!
近来,我的小主人手上不搓油,时间长了,我的背上都裂缝了,红红的,怪疼。可是小主人却不管不顾,我发了几次牢***(多在背上裂几道缝,小主人还是无动于衷,我伤心急了,以为小主人再也不关心我了,把我抛弃了。可是事实证明,我在小主人心中的分量还是蛮重的,不久,小主人向我道了歉(在我手背上搓油,我不责怪她,她的学习也很忙嘛!再说了,我是那种记仇的人吗?当然不是喽!
昨天,小主人给我洗了个“淋浴”——钢笔水洒了我一身,弄得我这里一块儿蓝那里一块儿蓝的,真难看!我真怕伙伴儿们看见笑话我,我也是要面子的哦!笑什么笑,人有脸面我也有,别太瞧不起人呶!
说了这么半天,我的“英姿”大家还不知道吧!掌心是我的前胸,它和手背组成了我的身体,我还有五个头,大小不一样,人们给我的五个头取了不同的名字:大拇指、食指、中指、无名指、小指。我的每个头上还顶着一顶小帽子,我习惯叫它指甲,指甲容易长长,所以我的右手兄弟和左手兄弟团结一心,互相剪指甲,使它短短的,好让我的小主人弹钢琴,我的模样很有个性吧!别的伙伴儿都挺羡慕我的样子喏!
记住我,忠实、有用、你离不开的手!
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
昨夜,我做了一个美梦。梦里,自己长大以后成了一位受人尊重的大发明家。我发明了不用电的电灯——“蓝宝石”;不用任何能源无任何污染的汽车—超级“飞、驶、航、潜、游、深”六用高压空气近光速多功能汽车;可随意移动,甚至可搬到月球、海底等地方安居的“瞬间移动房”……无边无际的宇宙中任意一个角落里都有我发明的东西!而且我还在世界发明创造大赛中得到好几次的等奖呢。因为我发明的东西深受大家的喜爱,所以大家都很喜欢我,还给我起了个外号——“智能博士”怎么样,这个名字不是白叫的吧!
醒来之后,我还为自己的发明创造得意了一番,兴高采烈地把“智能博士”的经历给妈妈讲了一遍。妈妈笑着说;“别光做美梦,把美梦实现才是真有本事呢!”美梦成真?对!我要紧紧抓住梦的手,从现在做起,在学习中多动手、勤动脑,在知识的海洋中奋勇搏击,不断向科学的高峰攀登,美梦一定会成真的!
不久的将来,你们一定会见到名副其实的“智能博士”,我有十足的信心。
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