去上海旅行的英语作文五年级【一】
星期四，阳光明媚，天气晴朗，我们来到上海植物园游玩。走进植物园的大门，那里的人络绎不绝。
那里的花、草、树、木和海宝有许许多多，一派生机勃勃的景象。我们来到长廊。说它是花廊，一点也不夸张。那里的花数不胜数。有蔷薇、玫瑰、牡丹……花的颜色都非常鲜艳，朵朵花都绽开的笑脸。有的花形成了EXPO世博会的标志；有的花形成了尊敬长辈的事情；有的花形成了一辆车………真是漂亮极了。
就先来说说郁金香吧。我们看见的郁金香是白色和绿色的，那阵香味真是沁人心脾。星期四我们去看的正好是花卉展览时期，所以，正当郁金香盛开的时候，正是最漂亮的呢。那里还有玫瑰呢。玫瑰有粉红色的、橙色的、大红色的………香味扑鼻而来，一阵清香吸入你的肺腑，使你感觉到心情舒畅。仙人球上也会开花？天大的笑话吧！其实这是真的。它的出生的在撒哈拉大沙漠。它的颜色呈淡黄色，很漂亮。我们还玩了“水上摇船”，同学们都玩得非常兴奋。
我们恋恋不舍的离开了上海植物园，乘在车上，望着蔚蓝色的天空，我的心还留在美丽的植物园呢。
去上海旅行的英语作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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去上海旅行的英语作文五年级【三】
今天是周六，我们先搭爸爸的车来到上海同济大学的校园，在那里下了车，然后我和妈妈来到地铁站，开始了我们今天的征程。
我们先坐10号线来到了上海博物馆，上海博物馆门口真是人山人海呀，队伍排得很长很长，绕了很多个弯，我们也没找到排队的起点。我和妈妈不约而同地想，这要排到什么时候呀，排到天黑也排不到吧！
于是，我们妈妈来到了附近的上海工人文化宫，正好工人文化宫正好在举行邮票展，我们看到了很多漂亮的邮票。原来不仅要邮票漂亮，粘贴方式也是非常重要的，还有邮寄的地址。同一套邮票，不同的人，可以收藏出不同的风格。
接着，我们逛了书城，看了电影，买了小吃，最后来到南京路坐我最喜欢的小火车。好不容易挤上了小火车，你别说，风景还真不错！炎热的夏天，坐在小火车上享受着习习凉风，看看南京路的人山人海，还真是一种享受。这边不像太仓，这边有各色的人种，有黑人，白人，最多的是我们黄种人，还有浅咖啡色的人…。穿着的衣服更是各不相同，有红色的，有黄色的，有绿色的，有黑色的，有白的的，有橙色的……随着小火车的行驶，到处都是靓丽的风景线。
小火车的终点是上海外滩，外滩的人更是摩肩接踵。于是，我们选择在外滩坐上轮渡，享受下黄浦江上的风景，逃离会儿人声鼎沸。
上海真是个繁华的大都市，这一天我逛了好多地方，买了很多好吃的，过得很开心，很快乐，当然也很充实！
去上海旅行的英语作文五年级【四】
这个暑假最使我开心的要数去上海的一日游了！
怀着喜悦的心情，踏上了上海一日游的汽车，行进的路上，我好奇地想：上海会是怎么样的呢，我们去的地方好玩吗？抱着这种好奇的想法，过了两个半小时后，我们来到了上海
“啊，上海真大呀！”我不禁脱口说道。我们首先来到上海老街城隍庙。城隍庙有许多小商品店，小商品店的东西琳琅满目，个个物廉价美，怪不得人都挤在商店里，好像不要钱似的。走道上人流如潮、人山人海。听说上海城隍庙的小吃很有名，果然名不虚传，我尝了红豆牛奶沙冰，牛奶冰加上红豆的点缀，那叫一个字：棒！
接下来，我们来到了上海人工滑雪场，一股凛冽的寒风迎面而来，只见有的人在堆雪人，他堆的雪人真漂亮呀，炯炯有神的眼睛清澈如水，小巧的鼻子恰到好处地点缀了那可爱的脸庞；有的在打雪仗，她们右手握着一大堆的雪，左手拿住滑杆，我想可能是用来凿雪的吧。慢慢地我掌握了滑雪的技巧，我想挑战一下自己，便乘着电梯来到了第2层滑雪，作好了心理准备，就往下滑，我觉得自己好像在高速公路上行驶的失控了的汽车一样，想停也停不下来，只听“砰”的一声我摔在雪地上，摔了个四脚朝天，没有办法，我只好摘下滑雪板，慢慢地走了下去。
时间过得真快，已经到了黄昏，由于时间问题，我只好依依不舍地离开了上海，踏上了回家的路程。
上海的一日游点缀了我的暑假，使我的假期更加快乐和充实了！
去上海旅行的英语作文五年级【五】
上海欢乐谷充满了惊喜与刺激。
下了车，首先来到了摇摆伞的面前，我们坐上去，没想到游戏开始了，跟看他们玩完全不一样。先是慢慢地旋转，然后越转越快，越转越快，似乎整个人飞起来了，似乎飞到那些游客的上面去了。我闭着眼睛直到快停了才睁开来。
接着，我们走刀了绝顶雄峰的'等待处。差不多排了一个小时的队伍，终于轮到了我们。正当我坐上去的时候，我心惊肉跳，因为玩过的人都尖叫过。先上升到离地60米的高空，正要下去的时候，突然停了一下，迅速下降，好像这个人要掉下去了，顿时我似乎要哭了，乘完以后我依然心惊肉跳。过了好久才恢复过来。
然后我们玩了梦幻驼鹿。它6也是旋装式的。只不过会让人觉得要撞到了。
到了中午，我们吃了一顿丰盛的午餐，之后，又玩了矿山历险，轨道建设在山中。速度极快。简直是过山车的翻版。
最后，玩了形状像章鱼的游戏，一会伸出这只触手，这只触手上的人就会被甩到半空中。一会伸出那只触手，那只触手上的人也会被甩到半空中。
如果你胆子够大，又喜欢玩。那就一定要去上海欢乐谷游玩下噢！
