mymother的英语作文五年级【一】
轻轻合上书，我的眼前便浮现出一个身影，她就是瑞士女作家约翰娜？斯比丽的长篇小说《海蒂》中的主人公，一个无比可爱、充满爱心、心底善良的小姑娘。
海蒂是不幸的，她从小失去父母，家庭贫寒。然而海蒂也是幸运的，在她的成长过程中，得到了许多好心人的帮助和关怀。在爷爷那里，她可以无忧无虑地玩耍，在玩耍中学到了知识。当海蒂做出一些别人看来很无礼的行为时，生意人埃斯曼先生总是出面保护她……宽松善意的生活环境养成了海蒂善良、乐观的性格。
当读到海蒂在路上遇到一位瞎眼奶奶，为奶奶不能看到东西而大哭时，我的鼻子不禁一酸，多纯洁善良的孩子呀！面对一位素不相识的老人，我们一般都不会去理她，而海蒂却会，还会为老人的不幸而伤心。牧羊娃彼得因为一点小事要打羊时，海蒂苦苦相劝，甚至答应把自己每天的奶油肉干给彼得，只为她不忍心看到羊儿挨打。我再一次被她善良的心感动了。我虽然觉得这些事她做得太傻，与事无补，但海蒂却用自己的爱心深深地打动了人们。我仿佛看到了一个爱的天使、爱的化身。
海蒂的纯真善良，就像一盏明亮的灯，无声地感染着周围的人，它使饱经磨难、离群索居的爷爷重新回到人们中间，对生活有了新的认识和感悟，在帮助他人的过程中实现着生命的价值；使长年与轮椅相伴的富家少女克拉拉重新站了起来，使贪玩厌学的牧羊娃彼得逐渐喜欢上学习，使在贫困和黑暗中艰难度日的瞎眼老奶奶找到了生活的乐趣……他们的生活都在海蒂的影响和帮助下变得美好并充满希望。可以说，哪里有海蒂，哪里就有笑声，就有欢乐，就充满了爱的温情。
海蒂有一颗金子般的心，在她身上有许多我们不具备的优秀品质。我一定要向海蒂学习，帮助别人，将自己的爱心奉献给每一个人。
mymother的英语作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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mymother的英语作文五年级【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
mymother的英语作文五年级【四】
快乐的小海蒂，宛如一位快乐的小天使，在人间播撒爱与善良的花瓣，让每一个闻到芬芳的朋友，都懂得了爱与感恩！
海蒂是一个孤儿，在大多人的眼中，孤儿楚楚可怜，孤单，冷漠……但这一些表示可怜的词在海蒂的身上却全然得不到体现。因为善良可爱的小海蒂从不抱怨，心态平和，热爱自然。尽管被姨妈送到了冷漠的爷爷那。所有人都替她担心，但是，天使怎么会害怕冷淡？当快乐的小天使海蒂遇到了性格孤僻的爷爷，她会用天真，真诚的'心灵感化爷爷，使爷爷也变得开朗，平和待人。人们眼中的恶魔的内心其实也很善良，海蒂让大家看清了这一点，难道她不是天使吗？
海蒂还帮助体弱多病的富家小姐克拉克对生活鼓起了勇气，坚定了与病魔斗争的决心。海蒂心存善念，热爱生活，热爱大自然，虽然年纪尚小，却懂得爱与感恩，有如一位快乐天使在人间。
书中的每一个人都很有特色：很有个性的爷爷，爱玩不学的牧童彼得，令人怜悯的瞎奶奶，三个孩子，三个老人，亲切而又感人。
不要觉得只有海蒂才可以做到受人欢迎，惹人喜爱。其实，只要拥有真诚，善良，慈善，快乐，爱人的心，你也将是一个人间天使。
快乐天使&&海蒂的代名词。好像这个世界上没有什么事让她不愉快。乐观，积极，向上，她总是快乐的。让别人实在没有什么理由呵斥她。这同样是很值得人们学习的一点。是的，这个世界有太多事让人们觉得不顺心，我们生活在一个不公平的世界里，但这并不代表我们不快乐，在快乐的时候做快乐的事，努力去快乐，让自己感受快乐。看开人情是故，其实没有什么大不了，想海蒂那样乐观开朗，我们会活得更轻松！
关心他人，理解他人，关怀他人，是瞎奶奶，克拉拉的奶奶最受人尊敬的地方。他们都体谅孩子，关怀他人，感悟爱，传播爱。
从《海蒂》一书中，我们确实可以学到很多很多，如果爱传满世界，海蒂的乐观传满世界，那么人间便成为爱的天堂。天使在人间，快乐便永驻人间！
mymother的英语作文五年级【五】
爱，是对朋友的珍惜。爱，是对自然的渴望。欢迎来到（海蒂）的世界！
海蒂才出生没几天，父母双亡，她被阿姨黛特带到了爷爷家。但是爷爷沉默寡言，性情古怪。最终，海蒂感化了爷爷，并结识了彼得和他的奶奶。可是好景不长，海蒂又被阿姨带到了相距十万八千里的法兰克福去陪大小姐克拉拉学习。克拉拉身体不好，脸色苍白。在海蒂的帮助下，她快乐了。
法兰克福的生活虽然富裕，可一点也比不上牧场。海蒂在塞斯曼先生的帮助下，回到了家。
在书里，我最喜欢的是海蒂。她单纯，善良，勤奋。我要向她学习，做一个好孩子。我相信我一定会做到！
爱，是对朋友的珍惜。爱，是对自然的渴望。欢迎来到（海蒂）的世界！
海蒂才出生没几天，父母双亡，她被阿姨黛特带到了爷爷家。但是爷爷沉默寡言，性情古怪。最终，海蒂感化了爷爷，并结识了彼得和他的奶奶。可是好景不长，海蒂又被阿姨带到了相距十万八千里的法兰克福去陪大小姐克拉拉学习。克拉拉身体不好，脸色苍白。在海蒂的帮助下，她快乐了。
法兰克福的生活虽然富裕，可一点也比不上牧场。海蒂在塞斯曼先生的帮助下，回到了家。
在书里，我最喜欢的是海蒂。她单纯，善良，勤奋。我要向她学习，做一个好孩子。我相信我一定会做到！
