当今社会的现象作文(社会中普遍存在的现象作文)

当今社会的现象作文(社会中普遍存在的现象作文)

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当今社会的现象作文(社会中普遍存在的现象作文)

当今社会的现象作文【一】

不久前爆发的“韩白骂战”闹得沸沸扬扬,在这里,我不谈事件根源,也不论孰是孰非。我不懂文学,当然也就不会争论什么文学不文学的,(这事儿恐怕不是文学争论那么简单咯)只说说从中看到的几个社会现象。

现象一:帮亲不帮理。

帮理不帮亲是中国历代传承的行为准则,但是社会发展到今天已不是这样子啦。譬如说吧,某人在街上被狗咬了,这人理所当然地向狗的主人讨要医药费,而往往狗主人只会敷衍一两句,然后狗主人的儿子就跳出来大讲“道理”,接着儿子那当官的老丈人也跳了出来,骂被咬之人撒泼使赖,对狗咬人一事却一字不提。天理何在!“韩白骂战”也是这个样子。先是白烨不止一次说韩寒的文学不够文学之类的话,韩寒看了那些话就骂了白烨,而白烨不答话,然后白烨的哥们跳了出来,接着哥们的儿子也跳了出来……跳来跳去,全是些不相***人,都只听说自己的亲朋好友被骂了,就不管孰是孰非,这个说韩寒是“红卫兵”,那个要抽韩寒俩巴掌,这都什么乱七八糟啊,典型的“帮亲不帮理”。

现象二:长辈的话就是至理。

长辈说:“不对,你是错的。”那么你就是错的。如果你说自己没错并指出长辈的.错误,就会被说成叛逆不尊重长辈,然后一群长辈围着你骂(一般地,他们不会耐心教育。还教育个屁,他们连是非黑白都不辨,就他们说的是真理)。尊老爱幼是中华民族的传统美德,所以晚辈应该尊敬爱护长辈,但是,我认为长辈并不就是年龄比自己大的人,对那些不辨是非歪曲事实甚至诋毁别人的人,纵然他们的年龄比自己大也不必把他们当长辈来尊敬,而是要大胆地指出他们的错误,毕竟爱心的泛滥,只会让他们错上加错;等到他们改正了错误,晚辈还是要视他们为长辈,而且加倍地尊敬他们。

现象三:暴力倾向严重。

在“韩白骂战”中,“抽嘴巴”“付出血的代价”等暴力字眼出现频率极高,由此现今社会暴力倾向严重可见一斑。作为长辈,作为有社会影响的人物,成天个把打啊***啊血啊等话儿挂在嘴边,这社会的暴力倾向能不严重吗?孩子从长辈那里得到一个讯息:以拳头解决问题。从家庭暴力到校园斗殴再到社会不良青年打群架,难道其中没有值得反省的东西?

以上是我从“韩白骂战”中看到的几个与现今社会现象有关的问题。

当今社会的现象作文【二】

在“韩白骂战”中,“抽嘴巴”“付出血的代价”等暴力字眼出现频率极高,由此现今社会暴力倾向严重可见一斑。作为长辈,作为有社会影响的人物,成天个把打啊***啊血啊等话儿挂在嘴边,这社会的暴力倾向能不严重吗?孩子从长辈那里得到一个讯息:以拳头解决问题。从家庭暴力到校园斗殴再到社会不良青年打群架,难道其中没有值得反省的东西?

以上是我从“韩白骂战”中看到的几个与现今社会现象有关的问题。

当今社会的现象作文【三】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;

2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);

3.你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people 

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:

1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。

1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。

2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。

3)传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.

当今社会的现象作文【四】

说起2007年,文化不多,文化事件却倒不少,不管你是走马观花回眸一瞥,还是“侧目而视”仔细打捞,映入眼帘的大抵是“一地鸡毛”而已。漫长360多天沉淀下来的文化积累,如果用“没文化”来形容,那大概是最合适不过的,而就拿这些“不能称化”的“文化”来说,它们既不像“鸟巢”那样有个“骨架”,也不像“水立方”那般有张皮肤。

盘点2007年的“文化”,虽说寥然甚亏令人寒碜,但说头儿多少有一点:“快乐男生”一成功举办电视台就笑了,作协副主席陈忠实书会受骗就哭了;博客点击突至网络第三当年明月就笑了,众歌星的演唱会票价都超过2000元许多追星族就哭了;于丹一走上“百家讲坛”就笑了,“超女”们一看到“超级男生”举办就哭了;“嫦娥一号”成功飞入太空中国人民就笑了,韩寒看到了郭敬明被破格批准为中国作家协会会员就哭了……笑了哭,哭了笑,或真实,或虚拟,2007年中国的文化“历程”就这样了。

不过也的确,现在的我们,真的就是“没文化”;如今的中国,也就是“缺文化”。看看电视上被众人所津津乐道,且每个参赛选手个个都自称是“江湖中人”的“武林大会”,你就会明白:三分的舞蹈“干货”,原来是可是被稀释成一档30多分钟的名牌节目来做的。不愧是武术“原产国”的做法。再看看《红楼梦》再拍的准备“花絮”,其间的“龙套”走得百姓果真是“眼花缭乱”没有一点“头绪”,光一个林黛玉的扮演者都能“如火如荼”上这么长时间,在众人都把它作为一个成名机会的情况下,有关单位还像搞“学问”似的举办了一个“选秀大赛”。这作为四大名着之一的《红楼梦》也着实是名副其实的够“红”的,不仅带动了其间的演员“红”了起来,而且还带动了其相关的投资商家的钞票“红”了起来,真的是落实了“共同富裕”的伟大宏旨。如果曹雪芹先生九泉有知,不知道会不会“红”得给“乐”活过来?另外,同为四大名着之一的《水浒传》,那也是“巾帼不让须眉”!准备重拍的剧本连一个字都还没有“加点”,宣传的“新闻”却都在网络上传得沸沸扬扬了。可是“言立”半年后,却还没见到这些爱“临时抱佛脚”的炒作者们有所“立足”。如此接二连三的“蛊惑”民心,“欺诈”百姓,不知道这些被金钱遮蔽了双眸的“鼓腰包”们到底想干些什么?中国有句俗语叫:“流言止于智者。”但屡次被“诈”之后为什么类似的“流言”还没有停止呢?可见那些自称是“文化人”的“文化人”并不是所谓的“智者”。

再看看如今被人高度追捧的“百家讲坛”,那可是独领着中国国学教育“文化”,“名家云集”的名台,别看是一座和老师上课教学并没有什么区别的三尺讲台,可那上面站的都是所谓的“名家”。“名家”们只要能站在上面“啼笑皆非”般的把孔子说成丧家狗,把庄子说成处处求人等米下锅的“乞丐”,然后再加上自己满腹经纶般的长篇大论,给台下的观众讲上几个已经“生米煮成熟饭”的`故事,然后就大功告成,名利双收。如此个“近水楼台先得月”的“风水宝台”,可想而知台下那些其它的名家对这座“台子”觊觎的颈项伸得有多么不可高攀。然而就是这种有悖于人类正常思维导向的“导举”,“名家”给“吹口气”还能在百姓中间“刮阵旋风”,这可见我们骄傲无知的现代白领人对中国家传统文化熟知的“白领”化。也可见在文化可陈的今天,“娱乐圈”都已经被我们拿来充当“文化圈”了。而单就从“文化人”的角度看,著名学者钱理群都豪不客气地说“我们这一代最没文化”,可想而知我们“君子固穷”的程度。其实,他说的“这一代”,也多包括了比他年轻的一代又一代。

美术家韩美林说过:“没有文化的文化是可怕的。”而文化和经济又是相辅相成,彼此融合的,所以说我们现代的经济也是“没文化”的。全国人大常委会副委员许嘉璐不是说过吗:“没有文化的经济再发达也是建在沙滩上的高楼大厦。”这句话形容现在的中国经济那可是“天衣无缝”。现在中国的楼房耸立得是够高的,可那是终究只是建立在“沙滩”之上的高楼大厦。一句真话的力量,抵得上整个世界。

透过“真话”和2007年的文化“足印”可以“以管窥豹”,看出在人心浮躁的现代社会,所有人都已被名利蒙上了“海市蜃楼”般的面纱,生活在世俗的假像和权力的保姆的怀抱之中,可以看出我们的文化体制存在着种种死穴,我们的文化基因也存在着种种缺陷,但是对于那些爱管文化的“文化官”却春风得意的满以为“文化风景这边独好”的状况,我想起了马季先生的一句相声来形容当今中国的“文化”和“文化人”:吹牛的人,上嘴唇着天,下中嘴唇接地。

事实上,在这个一见噱头、一听炒作,“fans”团们可就会喜滋滋乐呵呵屁颠颠地掏出上百元钱去影院观赏“大片”的年代,谁还可以被称为真正“有文化”的“资深”者呢?

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