哈尔滨的冬天要是有人问我:“你最喜欢哈尔滨的哪个季节?”我会毫不犹豫地回答:“当然是冬天啦!因为冬天……”。
你瞧,公园里到处光灿灿的,像是银色的王国!落光叶子的杨树、柳树头上,都铺满了蓬松的细雪,;矮小的树丛也盖上了一层厚厚的白色被子,远远望去好似一只睡着了的北极熊,又像是一头趴在那里的白象。如果你忍不住发出赞叹声,那声音一定会惊动树上的小鸟,小鸟便会从树上飞走,还会淘气地震落树上的雪,纷纷扬扬落下,可能都会落到你的脸上;偶尔,有调皮的孩子轻轻地推动小树,小树上的雪就会飘落下来,上面的冰条也许会“叮叮当当”地掉下来,宛如一首美妙的歌曲,可是很少有人愿意这样做,因为谁会舍得毁掉这样一座完美的雕塑呢?
冬天,虽然没有春天的风和日丽、鸟语花香;没有夏天的电闪雷鸣、蝉鸣蛙叫;没有秋天的落叶缤纷、黄菊吐艳,但它却有自己的含蓄和独特的美!我爱冬天!
教师评语:
冬天,美丽的冬天,有太多可以落笔的地方,小作者却把眼光投向了雪后的公园,合理展开想象,有动态有静观,自如运用修辞组织语言,成熟不失天真。
太阳羞涩的躲进了云层的怀抱,怎么也不肯露出它那绯红的脸庞。于是,在这阴霾沉寂的天空下,我瞥见一群飞鸟悄然掠过,看来冬天的脚步已经离我更近了。
早上起床,迈着轻松的步伐走到了屋外。屋外北风凛冽,银灰色的云块在天空中奔腾驰骋,寒流滚滚,好似正酝酿着一场大雪。过了一会儿,雪真得下起来了。起初是雪粒,就像天上有谁大把大把的撒着白砂糖,又像是一只只美丽的蝴蝶在风中翩翩起舞。落到地上,发出沙沙的声音,好像千万条蚕在争先恐后的吃着桑叶。不一会儿,雪粒汇集成了一大片一大片的雪花,好像许许多多的白花瓣被冬姑娘一片一片的往下撒,一簇簇,一团团……终于,蝴蝶的舞会结束了,浮现在我眼前的是另一番美景:大地又披上了一件白色的纱衣,那青松的针叶上,凝着厚厚的雪霜,像是一丛丛美丽的珊瑚;那落叶乔木的枝条上裹着白雪,宛如一株株白玉琢成的树;垂柳干枯的枝条上银丝飘洒,千姿百态,扑朔迷离,让人恍惚置身于童话世界中。
池旁腊梅,幽幽香气袭人,随着梅花的香气,我的脚步又不知不觉的来到了腊梅的身旁。梅花,它虽然不及牡丹的国色天香、月季的娇艳浮华,更不似玫瑰般姹紫嫣红、荷花般高贵典雅,但它迎着寒风而绽放,香气凌人;它不因错过小草的陪伴而懊恼,不因没有知了的歌唱而沮丧,不因缺少枫叶的伴舞而失落,但它有白蝴蝶似的雪花的陪伴,它从未寂寞。吹拂着它的是凛冽的寒风;照耀着它的是寒冬的残阳,滋润着它的是寒雪的雨露。正是这样,它才傲然绽放。
冬,不似春天那般生机勃勃,到处蕴藏着绿色的生命;不似夏天那样生灵尽显风姿,展示着自己的潇洒;更不似秋天那般硕果累累,拥有枫叶伴着秋风翩翩起舞的演出;冬天虽然显得萧***,但它银装素裹,白雪皑皑,它孕育着新的生机,新的希望……
我爱冬,爱它的一切的一切。
Winter grandpa quietly come to earth, a day and a night under the swirl of snow, the white snow, like the earth mother clothed with a robe.
Morning, dong dong and cc a listen to mom said its snowing, go and dress they wake up face, and then immediately ran into the yard and the children playing together.
The yard good lively! Some kids skiing in joyfully, some in jubilantly make a snowman, and in a snowball fight fiercely, its interesting! Dong dong and he also joined their ranks, cc to roll a big snowball, while others are responsible for the snow together, dong dong vigorously piled the snow together. He stood up, yi? As a something! So she quickly ran home, running said: \"I go home to take something!\" After a while, he was holding a small bag excitedly ran out. First she mysteriously from the bag took out two round and the little black button in the lovely face of light snow person, then took out a root long thin carrots in below the eye, and then take out a piece of red pepper do snowman mouth labeled, then on the ground to find two young trees on both sides of a fork in a snowman, a lively and lovely snowman was born. Last winter winter took off his scarf and hat to wear of light snow person, snowman has become more lifelike.
Spring is coming, winter winter and cc after learning home found that accompany the yard daily snowman is missing, they were very sad. Mother cant bear to see them so sad, and told them: \"light snow men afraid of you sad just wrote a letter to you, quick to see!\"
Winter grandpa left, and I began the New Year, I thank you gave me life gave me dressed up so pretty! Accompany I had a great winter! I really dont want to leave you! See the next winter.
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