初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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到了20xx年,世界上有了一个星期八,一个星期八等于平常的一个星期,让我们来设计一下星期八该怎样开心度过吧! 假如有个星期八,我会和妈妈一起来到迷人的夏威夷海岸,早上睡到自然醒,然后再不慌不忙地从舒适小床上爬起来,洗脸漱口、吃诱惑像我这样的小馋猫的美味佳肴,最后再去海岸走路、喝茶,享受能让人神清气爽的海风,这滋味,别提有多好受了!这就是我想像中的星期八,一个过得无忧无虑的星期八——幽静、清爽。 假如有个星期八,我会与李晓帆、曾语嫣等好朋友一起去逛街。我们左看看来,右看看,看见价格合理的东西就买,走得上气不接下气,累得不得了。东西买够了,我们进入古典的洗脚城,舒舒服服地躺着,想看电视就看电视、想看书就进入书香的世界。洗完脚便在床上睡个安稳觉。这就是我想像中的星期八,一个在都市度过的星期八——热闹、快活! 假如有个星期八,我会独自一人来到一望无际的田野,享受田园的美丽景致。到了农田,我便看见了金黄色的稻子,在温和的阳光照耀下,金灿灿的,酷似一片黄金。
走进田野,望望上面的天空碧海一般,好像没哪个地方的天空能与田园是的蓝天一争高下了。继续走着,农民们便热情款待我,带我去他们的家,吃当地的特产,喝用五谷酿的美酒,虽说不是好合我的口味,但我感受到了农民很好客,我会想起一句古诗:“莫笑农家腊酒浑,丰年留客足鸡豚。”最后,农民们还教我认识蔬菜水果,让我改掉“五谷不分”的毛病。这就是我想象中的星期八,一个沉浸在田园风光中的星期八——美丽、幸福。
一个星期有七天,在前五天中,完全被学习霸占了,而在星期六、星期天中,虽然是双休日,却感觉被安排得满满的补习班给占了,就算挤出那么点儿时间,也不得不做作业。总之,一星期在我看来,根本没有空余的时间。假如有个星期八……
假如有个星期八,过完了星期天,我就没有了补课班,没有了作业,也没有了烦躁的心情。
假如有个星期八,我可以打扫自己的房间,因为房间早已凌乱不堪,而我以前都没时间去整理。现在,我可以当一个乖乖女,自己拿着吸尘器,吸走灰尘;拿着扫把,扫出所有垃圾;拿着拖把,把房间的地板拖得油亮油亮的;用双手,把堆在一块的杂东西各自放回各自的地方。看,有了星期八,我的生活多么干净!
假如有个星期八,我不用背着沉重的书包,迈着繁重的步伐走向那地狱般的补习班,而是背着轻巧的小背包,迈着轻快的步伐,出门与同学去玩。去欢乐谷,坐那刺激好玩的过山车;去黄鹤楼,观览武汉的景致。以前,学习任务都完不成,更别谈出门与朋友嗨。现在,可以与朋友嗨到晚上,一起吃饭,一起洽谈,一起玩耍。看!有了星期八,我的生活变得多么有趣。
假如有了星期八,我也可以把它变成放松式的。我可以在家里,拿出心仪已久的书,坐在沙发上,认真品读,走进作者心里,体会作者的内心世界。然后可以看会儿电视,玩会儿手机,尽情享受星期八。看!有了星期八,我的生活多么幸福!
假如有个星期八,我便有个放松的时间,那样,整个人都会身心舒畅了!
“时光老人!时光老人!”我探着头,大声地呼喊。时光老人看了看我,摸了摸我的脑袋,和蔼和亲地说:“怎么了,孩子?”“我……我太没自由了!每当周末,我只能眼睁睁地看着同龄的小朋友在小区里尽情地玩耍,飞快地奔跑,可自己却要应付堆积如山的作业,心里就很不是滋味!呜!”不知为什么,说到这里,我的眼泪像断了线的 珍珠一样往下掉。时光老人沉思良久,最后一字一句地说:“好吧!我给你一个星期八!”我听了,高兴得一蹦三尺高…… 假如有个星期八,我可以悠闲地坐在柔软的沙发上。翘着二郎腿,品尝着香甜的点心,喝着爽口的汽水,津津有味地看着书,看到〈〈淘气包马小跳〉〉时,我会浮想联翩,和他一起享受着精彩生活;读到〈〈西游记〉〉时,那九九八十一难,难难惊险、刺激,我也为师徒四人的勇气感到骄傲;念到〈〈笑猫日记〉〉时,笑猫坚持不懈的精神,让我明白了阳光就在风雨后! 假如有个星期八,我会来到风景优美的公园里,与朋友们一起欢乐嬉戏,和花儿来个亲密动作,和小草来个亲切问候,吸一吸清新的空气,看一看迷人的景色,闻一闻芬芳的花香,玩一玩有趣的游戏,触一触高大的绿树,踏一踏松软的草坪…… 与大自然来一个快乐拥抱!
假如有个星期八,我会来到老人院,与爷爷奶奶拉拉家常,听听音乐,讲讲故事,说些今年的开心事儿,表演些自己最拿手的节目,为爷爷奶奶捶捶背,揉揉肩,做一些力所能及的家务活,减轻他们的负担。带爷爷奶奶到美丽的公园走走,闻闻新鲜的空气,看看城市的变化,让爷爷奶奶不在孤苦伶仃,无依无靠。 虽然我这个梦想无法实现,但是我们只要合理地安排时间,认真的利用时间,好好地珍惜时间,那么,星期八就在明天!
我的一周是超忙碌的七天——周一到周五上学,周六周日培训课。加上我妈性格不好,爱唠叨。我这一周的日子怎能安宁?我是多么想能有一个宁静的放松的星期八啊!
有个星期八当然好,一整天休息,无忧无虑,什么也不用做。但深入一想,不对,有可能更为忙碌!
先不说妈妈找事。舞蹈老师一见到这个多出来的星期八可能会格外高兴:“有了这个星期八多好啊!我可以让学生排练,平时文化课多,不能多排,这多出来的一天就要排个痛快!”学校校长知道有了这个星期八,大概也会眉开眼笑,不亦乐乎,连发上课的通知——大家以前一周都有几个下午是文艺课,这会儿有这样难得的一天,我们再把文化课抓一抓!”
再来说我妈,她估计也乐了。多管教我是她人生的乐趣所在。这不,多了个星期八,她更有一万个道理让我繁忙了。她会给我安排语、数、英三门课另外的加强班,说要让我好好补补。不止这些,培训班的课后作业也会让我忙得不可开交。学校里规定的笛子曲目有三首,要把它练好至少要用上两个小时;还有钢琴练熟也得花点时间吧。奥数作业不像笛子,吹吹就好,还要绞尽脑汁地解题;英语更是苦恼,又不是国语,天天有用到,好生麻烦!
天呀!多个星期八,不仅不会得到什么更好的休息,反而会变得更忙碌更抓狂,还是不要的好呀!
假如有个星期八,我会去做许多事情。那天,我肯定会过得无比幸福。
星期八的早晨,我会先睡一个大懒觉,到九、十点再起床。起床以后,我便会换上干净的衣服,来到收拾得很整齐的书桌前,将星期八的作业写完。
时针指向十一点。我会和全家人来到漳河家的菜园,这里是最让我放松的地方。我和爸爸拿上劳动工具,扛着锄头、提着水壶、菜篮一前一后来到心爱的菜地。
到了菜园,我们先将菜园里的杂草清理干净,再给菜浇浇水,松松土。这些事都做好之后,我和爸爸便去摘一些我们亲手种下的蔬菜,把它们放在篮子里带回家,再将它们收拾收拾,就变成健康又环保的盘中餐了。不用说,星期八的口味特别好,因为盘里有我亲手劳动的欢乐。
至于下午,我还会邀请几个伙伴,到龙泉公园逛一圈,溜达的感觉很好,没有目标,也不要什么目标,只是漫无目的走走,就心满意足了。
对了,我也会来到龙泉公园的桥上,使劲地踏上几脚,使整个桥都开始摇晃,让自己的笑声像叮叮当当的风铃在空气中碰响。还有三头石象那儿,我也绝不会遗忘,要挨个儿爬一爬,摸一摸,坐一坐,再去荡一荡秋千,玩一玩传声筒,走一走人行栈道。星期八的感觉就这么棒!
夜幕降临,灯火阑珊,我们一家人会来到奶奶家吃饭。哦,那里会有很多人,会有好多热气腾腾的菜。碗,白白的,瓷瓷的;饭呢,香香的,暖暖的。正是我和爸爸做的。吃着饭,喝着饮料,再聊聊天,大家在一起,说一桌子祝福的话,其乐融融!
等从奶奶家回来,天已不早了,天上那灰灰的云已笼罩着这座城市了。回到家,我洗完了澡,看了一会儿书,躺在了床上,安静地入睡了。
啊!梦又香又甜,像一粒谷子在稻穗上摇曳。
星期八的日子,就这么棒!
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
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