初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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七月下旬我到北京旅游。它这里比长沙的树多,你走在外面,那里都绿树成荫,那里都惬意凉爽。
俗话说“不到长城非好汉”,这次我当了好汉!因为我去了八达岭长城,果然壮观,它十分陡峭,有些石阶高过我的膝盖。那天天气出乎我的意料,艳阳高照,但我没有退缩,而是勇往直前。我爬着这古代人民智慧的精华,感到无比自豪和骄傲。我想,如果在天上看的话,那将会是看到一条蜿蜒的巨龙。
紧接着,我游览了故宫,走进里面,就像穿越了到了明朝,里面用金碧辉煌形容一点都不为过。我狠狠地体验了一把古人的生活,房梁大殿无一不体现出了永乐年间的繁荣盛世。
在这个古老的城市——北京,我似乎又梦回了古代······
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
偶然翻动书页,竟从中滑落一片银杏叶,纵式的纹理在叶面上凸显,好似褪去金黄色外衣的古老油纸。
记忆的船缓缓摇进时间的河。那一次,我与北京相约。
火车驶了一夜才到北京,一下车便仿佛步入一个鼎盛的王朝。飞檐流金,霓虹溢彩,城门与高架桥齐飞,名园与广场一色,传统元素与新潮流相处和谐,我不禁高呼:“北京,我来啦!”
犹记得老舍的《四世同堂》中,那草木葳蕤的小羊圈胡同,沉淀着爱国主义者的深情,承载着亡国的苦难。辗转乘了几次地铁,出站南锣鼓巷,眼前并无高楼,而是用朴素的灰铺就的迂回巷道,如走进老屋时撞见的插在旧瓶中的一支芦苇,虽朴素平常却拨动内心的弦,百转千回。
北京人是善于在平凡中寻找情趣的。“总布胡同”“炒豆胡同”,从这些名字中依稀可以窥见那牵动人们生活的炊烟,轻轻淡淡地笼住几声鸟鸣,继而在蓝天散去。走入一条胡同,蓦然与一宅院邂逅。据说那是清代某户贵族的府邸,一道道高墙封住了闺中人对秋天的所有情思,唯见一棵银杏似哨兵高高瘦瘦地立着,小扇似的金叶缀了满满一枝头,风吹叶摇,一纸一纸的金黄翩跹飞落,似蜻蜓颤动金色的翅膀。
休息片刻,便去了香山。面前不是五岳般的险峻山峰,而是绵长开阔的缓坡,两旁的店铺鳞次栉比:暖黄的葫芦上飘着红丝带;京剧的生旦净丑,或巧笑倩兮,或怒睁嗔目,或花脸招摇……这一切怎能不唤起对传统文化的认知?
香山的枫叶只尖上泛点点朱色,似小姑娘脸上泛起的红晕。倒是银杏花枝招展,戴着金色的步摇,一步乐,一步一欢笑。
“那里,那里!”循着人们欢喜的目光看去,一棵枫树,“小枫一夜偷天酒”,秋日的醉意给它抹上了烈焰红唇,舍不得碰——红得那么透明,那么彻底,是秋日天空下璀璨的红水晶。于是乎,捡一落叶,聊以纪念。
火车穿过无边的田野,回头看,京都的轮廓渐渐淡出视线。掏出那枚红叶再看,它分明描绘了古都的历史,绣出了明日的辉煌。
自从学了关于首都北京的课文,我就一直向往着去看一看,想不到这个暑假完成了愿望。有一天清晨,妈妈忽然发现过两天的高铁有票,于是马上抢,居然抢到。因为外公家族那边都是铁路人,所以我很想坐一坐据说最快的铁路——高铁。这样就可以一次过满足了我的两个愿望——坐高铁去北京!
当我踏上高铁,感觉许多东西都很新奇。车厢里很干净,没有其他火车那样有股异味,车上有洗手池,冷热热水,每个车厢还有显示列车的时速,最快居然达到309公里的时速,好快啊!
经过八个小时的车程,我们在下午到达了北京西站。因为妈妈去过许多次北京,而且做好了攻略,所以很快就到了入住的酒店——北京首都大酒店。听说这酒店以前只接待外宾的,但现在我们也能入住。晚上我们去了附近著名的王府井大街。北京街头有许多警察,北京西站有,王府井大街这也有。我们去了很出名的全聚德吃烤鸭。虽然味道不错,但我觉得还是我们广东的***鹅更好吃更便宜。
接下来几天,我们没有去人挤人的著名景点,因为妈妈说北京城里都是景。我们去了恭王府、北海公园、北京***等,还去了许多很有特色的胡同。恭王府听说是清朝一个的家里,真的好大好大,我们足足逛了一个多小时才走完。府里面有许多房子,还有山和湖,就好像一个大公园一样。这次旅程北京***是我们必去的地方,因为课本上写得很好。我们是下午去看降旗的,虽然***广场非常大,但很多人,当看到解放军叔叔降下旗,护旗经过金水桥进***时,大家都很激动。北京的胡同真多,而且很漂亮,在一处街头,我看见一间很有中国特色的房子,他的屋顶是尖尖的,门窗红红绿绿的,最漂亮是那些窗子上的玻璃,七彩缤纷,好漂亮啊!
北京真的很美,怪不得以前的皇帝都把这作为首都。这次的五天旅行实在不够,我希望有时间再来!
7月21日,我们起床之后,赶紧准备东西,去爬长城。
我们要爬的是慕田峪长城。今天的天空阴沉沉的。天气预报说,今天会有暴雨。但这并没有扫我们的兴。我们带好雨衣,拿好雨伞,出发了。
我们上了车。车足足开了两个小时左右才到达目的地。这时,雨已经开始下了,不过只是毛毛雨而已。穿上雨衣,我们到长城的售票处买了票,便进去了。
我们坐缆车到了长城。慕田峪长城多建在外侧陡峭的崖边,依山就势,以险制厄。墙体高七八米,墙顶宽四五米,建筑材料以花岗岩为主。我看了一下,每块石头大约长2米、宽0.5米、厚0.3米。而且,在建长城时,人们并没有水泥,砌长城用的是一种特殊的配方,主要是糯米。而那种配方的硬度并不亚于高级水泥,这就是古人智慧的力量,才使这座长城千年不倒。
我们登上了长城。这时,长城上云雾缭绕,爸爸说,如果没有雾,就可以看到长城最雄伟的景。长城很宽,可容得下三辆小汽车同时行驶。每隔数千米,都会有一个烽火台。每个烽火台大约有十二米高,大约有七米宽。走到里面,里面有很多间室,还有一个楼梯通向烽火台顶端。我爬上去后往下面看,只见长城两边是原始森林,根本无法想象以前人们是怎么把大石块运上来的。
都说在晴朗的天气里爬长城最好,可是我今天却看到了不一样的长城。白色的雾一部分被风扯成一条条的,撞击在长城上。走进雾里,感觉在仙境里一般。在这里完全不会感受到夏日的酷热,只是凉爽的风。
雨一直不停,我们必须得赶回去了。可开到安定门前的时候,路彻底被淹了。叔叔开着大别克车,小心翼翼的往前挪,周围不断有车冒烟死火。叔叔、爸妈都心急如焚,妈妈不断的祈祷。终于,半小时的路,我们用了两个小时,从一堆死火的车里,挪了出来。回到酒店,我们打开电视,才知道,我们遇到了多年难遇的大雨,同时看到电视直播抢救那位遇难司机的过程。。
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