五年级英语上的作文怎么写【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语上的作文怎么写【二】
Grandpa was ill. He was lying on the bed all day. He looked haggard and frowned. Originally smooth and round face suddenly added a lot of wrinkles, black and shiny hair also lost the luster of the past, a few strands of white hair quietly climbed to the top of the head.
在我上学的日子里，幸好还有小猫陪在他身边，带给他一些快乐。希望爷爷早日好起来，继续和我一起幸福地生活。
In my school days, fortunately, there are also kittens around him to bring him some happiness. I hope Grandpa will get better soon and continue to live happily with me.
五年级英语上的作文怎么写【三】
放假了，来到湖北，简直是来到了天堂，爷爷奶奶或是亲戚朋友，都非常热情，住在大姨家的这几天，从水果到牛奶，从正餐到点心，都十分的好吃。不过，再多也不易多吃——我还是长着个湖北的嘴巴、温州的肚子。——辣的东西我都说我能吃，可我的肚子，却抗议了！
第一天到，奶奶烧了一只鸭子，用一个字形容——辣！饭桌上摆着我先前一直想吃的鱼糕，我还强调，这种糕一定要鱼做的，不要肉做的。鱼做的会更有那种味道，吃一口就保证还会再吃一口！这是湖北的特色之一——鱼糕，饭桌上唯一不辣的食物。
湖北人好吃辣，但不至于是麻辣，可我就已经完完全全受不了了！吃鸭子时，我总要大杯大杯的灌饮料。即使到饭馆吃，也是全辣的，啥啥啥都辣。忽然炒出一盘我的最爱——西红柿炒蛋，就不是很辣了，但我竟然接受不了了。不辣的，我还嫌它难吃……
即使夏天去吃大酒店，也会摆上湖北的特色，桌子一圈圈都是干锅。和冬天完全没什么两样，因为在我的记忆里，冬天也是吃干锅、火锅的。餐桌上，我的姐姐妹妹都吃肉，而我一个人在乐滋滋的剥虾。姐姐说，这就是湖北和温州的区别了！
由于辣，先是咳嗽、再进展为喉咙痛，今天竟然又进一步升级为流鼻血！长这么大我还从没流过一次，印象中是流过一次，但不是上火缘故，而是抠的……但这次不会是抠的，鼻血在鼻子里有节奏的流动，我在外边拿着纸巾用力的擦，第一次流鼻血，也不管这么多了，目的.就为了擦干，貌似这是异想天开。但见到美食，鼻血也没往外边冒了。
鼻血，流归流；辣，吃归吃。刚才还流鼻血，现在马上去吃湖北最有名的面条——说实话，还是中午那个没有什么调料的面条好吃些，这面条，白菜、榨菜加肉丝，面汤是红色的，像康师傅红烧牛肉面的汤那种红。吃到一半，也就吃不下去了——太辣，太烫了！
大姨又买了湖北的小吃，一是牛肉饼，味道像披萨饼的感觉，但忽然在吃的时候发现了一个“不明物体”，也就吃不下去了。这也是我不喜欢吃包子的原因，因为我的眼睛总是会在肉里找到类似的“不明物体”；还有一个饼，是用米做的，外边是脆脆的，可里面是软软的，再一吃——是米酒的味道——噢！！！我讨厌的。
不过湖北食物也具有它最最独特的味道，我喜欢湖北，我喜欢湖北的味道！我的舌尖跳跃着湖北的味道……
——明天就要离开荆州，又要继续在路上奔波了！
五年级英语上的作文怎么写【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级英语上的作文怎么写【五】
这说明他们对生命非常珍惜、热爱。 尤其是老黄，他在那么恶劣的环境中还表现出对知识的不断追求和不求名不求利对生活、生命充满无限热爱的高尚品德。让我们向老黄学习，鼓起我们生命的“热气球”，朝着理想的彼岸，努力吧！
