五年级英语童话作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语童话作文【二】
星期四下午，全校学生将去浙江儿童艺术中心观看一部家喻户晓的童话剧——《阿拉丁和神灯》。这一决定引发了班里同学的议论，大多数人都是报着一种不以为然的态度，其原因皆为觉得这篇童话对于六年级的学生来讲过于幼稚。
演出开始了——精心布置的舞台透露出异国风情，身着阿拉伯服饰的异国族人跳着欢快的舞蹈，大家的视线都被牢牢紧锁在舞台上。但这种情况没坚持多久就随着剧情的发展而淡化，多数人又把精力全放在聊天上，从而导致了我到演出结束也不知道个所以……然……
也许《阿拉丁和神灯》的确在儿时成为了孩子新中一个完美的梦——阿拉丁是那样淳朴善良，公主是那般美丽聪慧，还有那个神奇的油灯，无尽的财富，都让孩子们向往陶醉。然而，童话依旧是童话，它不可能成为现实。你会发现无论把自己家里的灯具（包括微波炉繁荣显示灯）擦几遍幻想中的精灵也不会出现；无论在地上挖几个洞，梦想中的满是珠宝的洞穴也终究不会存在。
而且随着年龄的增长，童话在我们眼里慢慢变得幼稚、虚假且庸俗。故事的开头往往是“在很久很久以前……”故事的.结尾常常是“王子和公主过上了幸福的生活”，再也不能吸引住大孩子的眼球。《阿拉丁和神灯》也是同样的，即便曾经痴迷过它，如今在眼前的也只不过是一篇无聊幼稚的童话剧。
神灯的梦醒了，童年也已交给了尘封的记忆，只留下残缺的片段会时而出现在我的脑海里。《阿拉丁和神灯》随着时间永远禁锢在了儿时的天空下，那个努力寻找油灯的孩子的身旁，在那里定格成了童年童话般的快乐。虽然只是童话，却已足够带给一个孩子一段快乐。
五年级英语童话作文【三】
从前，有一只小猪在森林里快活地生活着。
有一只大灰狼到森林里来吃小动物，小猪吓了一身冷汗，可还是鼓起勇气面对大灰狼。小猪让所有小动物到家里去藏好，小动物纷纷逃窜，有的卷成一个球往家里滚，有的跟小兔子似的一下子跑得无影无踪，还有的和小猪在一起，想办法如何对付大灰狼。小猪灵机一动，想出了一个好办法，它让每只小动物都做了一个鬼脸，越可怕越好，然后把鬼脸贴在衣服上或贴在脸上，然后去吓大灰狼，小狗戴上了木乃伊面具，大灰狼一看有鬼吓得昏了过去，等它醒来，早就被小猪押进地牢去，没有它的允许，谁也休想进去，而且地牢的'周围都有士兵严严地看守着，就算会隐身的人也没用，因为这附近机关重重，所以谁都别妄想把大灰狼从这救出去。
小猪让卫兵每天给大灰狼送三次饭，因为那地牢里又黑又冷，所以卫兵去送饭的时候都要穿一件厚厚的大衣，还要点一把火，卫兵把饭送给了大灰狼，正当卫兵转身的时候扑了上去，一口咬到了卫兵，津津有味地吃了起来。因为大灰狼饿了很长时间了，几口就把卫兵吃的一干二净，卫兵手上的火把掉到了地上，整个地牢烧起了熊熊大火，大家忙着救火，火灭了，小猪冲了进去，一剑把大灰狼***死了。
从此，小猪又过上了快乐的生活。
五年级英语童话作文【四】
狮子大王它要举行一个婚礼，它请小乌龟陶陶来参加晚会。
有一天，小乌龟陶陶它在散步呢!一只雁子飞过来对它说：“狮子大王的婚礼要举行一个婚礼，我们得点早早出发。”
第二天，小乌龟陶陶很早就起来了，它走啊走，它碰见了一只蟋蟀，蟋蟀问它：“你这么急急忙忙是要到哪里去呀?”小乌龟陶陶说：“我要去参加狮子大王的'婚礼。”蟋蟀笑着对它说：“这么远的地方，你这样慢慢地爬，你能爬到吗?”小乌龟陶陶说：““只要一步步坚持走，就一定能够到的。”说完，它就又走了。
它在路边看见一只蜘蛛，蜘蛛看见小乌龟陶陶急急忙忙在爬，就问小乌龟：“你这样急急忙忙的在赶，是要去哪里呀?”小乌龟陶陶说：“我要去参加狮子大王的婚礼。”蜘蛛哈哈大笑着对它说：“这么远的地方，你这样慢慢地爬，你能爬到吗?”小乌龟陶陶低头看了看自己的四条腿，虽然很短，但很结实，说：“只要一步步坚持走，就一定能够到的。”说完，它又一步一步地走了。
它碰到了野鸭，野鸭问它：“这么远的地方，你去哪里呀?”小乌龟陶陶说：“我要去参加狮子大王的婚礼。”野鸭说：“这么远的地方，你能到吗?”小乌龟陶陶说：““只要一步步坚持走，就一定能够到的。”说完，它又一步一步地往前走。
它爬到了河边，碰见了蜗牛，蜗牛问它：“你要去哪里呀?你这样急急忙忙地干嘛呢?”小乌龟陶陶说：“我要去参加狮子大王的婚礼。”蜗牛嘲笑说：“这么远的路，你能爬到吗?”小乌龟陶陶说：“只要一步步坚持走，就一定能够到的。”它说完，又一步一步往前爬。
它又碰到了一群乌鸦，乌鸦问它：“你这么急急忙忙地，你要去哪里呀?”小乌龟陶陶说：“我去参加狮子大王的婚礼。”乌鸦嘲笑说：“这么远的地方，你怎么能爬到呢?”小乌龟陶陶说：“只要一步一步往前爬，就一定能爬到的。”他说完又往前爬。
它看见一块美丽的大草原，那里鲜花盛开，很美。
它看见了很多的动物，就上前问：“这是不是狮子大王的婚礼?”小动物们告诉它狮子大王的已经死了，该轮到大王的孩子了。
这时，狮子大王的孩子带过来一位美丽的母狮子出来了。大家在一起都很热闹，敲鼓的敲鼓，吹喇叭的吹喇叭，吹笛子的吹笛子。它们坐在一起吃吃喝喝很快乐，小乌龟陶陶也坐在客人当中，虽然有些惭愧，但心里还是很开心。
五年级英语童话作文【五】
在一个美丽的大草塘里，住着一条小鲤鱼和一条大鲶鱼，大鲶鱼依仗着自已身大力大，常常欺负小鲤鱼但小鲤鱼却从不和它计较。
有一天傍晚，小鲤鱼在草塘里找吃的，找了好久，也没有找到一点食物。小鲤鱼叹了口气，想：大概今天要挨饿了。正当小鲤鱼扫兴的想回家时，忽然，前方有一点黑影，在水中荡来荡去。小鲤鱼迅速的游了过去，一看，呀!竟然是自己最爱吃的蚯蚓。小鲤鱼高兴极了，正想享用这美餐，这时一阵风吹来，在水波粼粼之中，有一条黑色的线影一闪而过。小鲤鱼心里一动，想到妈妈告诉它的话：找食物时一定要小心，当心人们下诱饵。正当小鲤鱼犹豫不决的时候，大鲶鱼正巧游了过来，看见了小鲤鱼跟前的蚯蚓，马上冲了过来。小鲤鱼一见大惊，忙用身体挡住了大鲶鱼的去路，说：“不行，小心诱饵!”大鲶鱼摆了摆它那长长的胡须说：“滚开，小东西，你是怕我抢了你的食物吧!”说完，用它那大大的尾巴的一扫，将小鲤鱼抛开，然后张开大嘴，一口就将蚯蚓吞进了肚里。
结果可想而知，大鲶鱼被渔夫捉走了。
