五年级英语作文短篇【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文短篇【二】
一个风和日丽、阳光明媚的早晨，小鸟在枝头歌唱，一片生机勃勃的景象。
在一片西瓜地里，西瓜们都坐着谈天说地，快乐地享受着生活。此刻，一阵风把一只红气球吹到了西瓜地。那只红气球穿着一身红色的连衣裙，头上还系着一个粉色的蝴蝶结，漂亮极了。西瓜们望了望，又继续聊起来。
红气球昂着头、挺着胸，摆了摆手，说：“嗨，大家好!”西瓜们也都向它打声招呼，红气球边摆弄自己的裙子，边说：“看看你们一个个穿得衣服，一点鲜艳的颜色也没有，真难看!”绿西瓜们只是微微一笑。红气球又用轻蔑的口吻说：“你们难道一直都在这个破地方呆着呀?真不可想象有多枯燥，一点情趣都没有。”一个西瓜憨厚地说：“对呀，我们可没有你本领大，能飞到别的城市。”红气球故意用怜悯地口气说：“唉，你们好可怜啊!”另一个西瓜说：“我觉得我们一点也不可怜，在这里生活照样很精彩。你都去过什么地方啊?”一阵微风轻轻吹来，红气球有点飘飘然了，夸起口来：“我去过伟大的首都北京，游览过闻名世界的万里长城，还有上海的东方明珠……”红气球接着炫耀下去，其实它从来没去过那么多地方，只是想让西瓜们羡慕自己，而西瓜们早就听得不耐烦了。这是又一阵风吹来了，红气球还没玩而够呢，就被吹上了天，西瓜们都哈哈大笑。空中的红气球更骄傲了，便展示自己飞的本领。一只鸟从天空飞过，以为红气球是什么好吃的，飞过去一啄，红气球破了。
红气球消失了，而绿西瓜们还在地里快乐的生活着。
五年级英语作文短篇【三】
甜甜兔买回来一台电视机，小动物们知道了，都来瞧新鲜。
小猴子说：甜甜兔，这叫啥玩意儿?怎么玩儿的呀?
甜甜兔说：这呀!叫做电视机，只要一按遥控器上的按钮，就能看到非常有趣的东西。
大伙儿听了，纷纷发出赞叹的声音：这可真是一件神奇的东西啊!
小老鼠更是凑近了瞧。
甜甜兔得意极了，它按了一下遥控器。
电视机一下亮了，里头还出现一只猫!大猫一下子冲小老鼠冲过来，害的小老鼠一下子蹦的老远，躲在角落里直发抖。
这可把大家伙儿都惊呆了，甜甜兔却笑的直不起腰。
小老鼠生气的说：哼!甜甜兔，你这是什么可怕的方脸怪兽呀?都吓死我了你还笑呢!
甜甜兔指了指‘方脸怪兽’，边笑边说：哈哈哈哈!你们瞧吧!那只猫是不会出来的.!
大家往电视里一瞧，小老鼠也用手捂着眼睛，露出一条缝隙，透过缝隙里看。
果然，那只猫被困在电视里，出不来啦!哈哈哈哈!
