或许童话不喜欢喧嚣,不喜欢繁华,它只静静地呆在远离城市的角落,不需关注,不需影响,从北风后的第一场雪,那童话的大幕便开始拉开,在茫茫的天地间,一场场飞扬的或大或小的雪,开始铺垫着整个背景,慢条斯理,有条不紊,渲染着,铺陈着,天地间成了最广阔的舞台,让每个身处其间的人在不知觉间走进一个梦幻般的世界,懵然间,你才发现自己已经被包容进一个银装素裹的环境。
房子上、街道旁、森里里,都淹没在漫无边际的雪原当中。菜园里一根根竖起的木头上玉米椽子都被雪盖上了厚厚的绒衣,成了一个个白盔的武士,威武侍立,房檐下结着长长冰凌,如一把把倒挂的玉剑。院子里的雪堆成了一座松软的小山,有几只公鸡喜欢站在上面,在阳光下展示他们锦缎般的羽毛。大人们套上牛车,将雪扔到车上,然后赶着向村外走,车轮跟雪地接触,发出吱呀呀的声音,脆生生的。牛蹄子在雪地上留下深深的印痕,拉车的牛不时从鼻子里喷出一团团的白气,随后便拉长脖子发出低沉的哞哞声,在寂静的空气中盘旋,竟振落了路边杨树上的簌簌积雪,让人的脖子发出一阵阵的嗖嗖地凉。
我们这些孩子,丢下手头的作业,躲过母亲的视线,拖着自家的小爬犁,三五从群地走出胡同,汇聚在一起。顺着曲折的.雪路,牵着爬犁走上陡峭的山坡,分好前后,技术好的在前面把握好方向,年龄小并且胆小的坐到后面,相当于驾驶和乘客,驾驶爬犁主要是用脚,速度和平衡则需要用手,手脚的协调十分关键,否则容易人养车翻。戴好手套,一个手握一个木棍,除了保持平衡,有时向前撑可以加速,向后别可以减速。准备好后,如果地势平缓可以先推一阵做个加速度,然后迅速坐上,于是一段充满惊险和刺激的旅程就开始了,爬犁顺着曲折的弯道开始向下飞驰,耳边生了风,眼前的树木、田野开始迅速地扑到,再被甩到身后,整个爬犁如同在雪地上飞行,山顶看去原本矮小的事物,在视线里慢慢地清晰起来,在别人眼里,如同一个从天上疾驰下来的精灵。
带着飞溅的雪屑,我们一边喊叫着,一边还要控制好节奏,直道还好说,遇到弯道则需要高超的技术。太快则容易翻车,太慢则容易被别人反超,那感觉类似如今的F1,只不过雪地版的比试。技术好的时候,爬犁会漂移一段距离后继续向前,刮起一片雪浪,很是精彩,其中滋味简直是秒不可言的。爬犁会继续向前滑行,直到慢慢地停下,然后画上记号,看谁滑行的最远,这个时候才能看出谁是这次记录的创造者。
当然了,没有谁会服气,大家会重新再来一次。当然也不是每次都这么顺利,有时会因为控制的不得当,爬犁会因为转弯太急,漂移幅度过大,便会滑出赛道,抑或是因为遇到木棍和鼓包失去平衡而冲进路边的小沟中,当然了,有厚厚的棉衣和厚厚地雪地,没有人会受伤,最多用棉袄袖子蹭蹭鼻涕,然后继续前行。有的时候,大家也会把彼此的爬犁连起来,然后往下滑,如同一条长长的游龙,蜿蜒盘桓,孩子们的欢笑声此起彼伏,直到天黑才会牵着爬犁往回走,小脸虽冻的通红,但是兴致却很高。回家第一件事就是把爬犁放好,那就是孩子眼中的赤兔马,都是无比珍惜,平日里更是爱护有加。
当然了,乐趣不止这些,我们也会到冰封的小河上去砸冰窟窿,看里面的流水,并去抓里面的小虾。有的穿着自己做的冰鞋在上面滑行,也有用小药瓶和玻璃球做成冰嘎,用小鞭子快速抽动,于是冰嘎便在主人的指挥下,旋转前进。顺着冰封的小河往下游走,穿过灌木丛,越过小路,继续向下,在落差大的地方,会形成一个阶梯状的冰滑梯,那是我们孩子最爱的,垫着个木板、石片,就能可以往下划了,由于不好把握方向,于是我们打着转往下滑,于是天地便一起旋转起来,等到了不转的时候,基本是站都站不稳了,有的时候,我们连木板都不坐,不肖一会,屁股上便结了一层厚厚的冰壳,往往让大人们哭笑不得。顺着冰河继续向下,就是著名的松花江了,此时的松花江已经完全被冰封了,都厚达一米多,形成了一个天然的旱冰场,大自然的鬼斧神工往往出乎人们的想象,正如***所说的:大河上下,损失滔滔。平滑的冰面上,覆着厚厚的雪,阳光一照闪闪发光,逼视得的你无法睁眼,两边的崖壁,此刻更现苍劲深沉。
风大的地方,雪被吹散了,露出了墨绿色的冰面,你可以看到黑黢黢的江水,这时会产生担心,偏偏从远处慢慢传来一声咔咔的沉闷声响,那感觉那声音仿佛从很远的地方直接奔到脚下,初次经历的人,不由地会胆怯,想拔腿往回跑,其实那是江水撞击冰面的声响,你大可放心,即使是汽车在上面行走都没有问题的。宽阔的江面上会有一串串的脚印,那是打渔人留下的,他们会通过一个个冰窟窿把网下到冰下的江水里,那时候感觉那是件很传奇的事。如果走累了,你可以到岸边休息,岸边都是拱起的大块冰块,晶莹透彻,那是人工冰冻达不到的效果,你还可以通过宽阔的冰封看见宝石般的颜色和质地,那是一种极为美丽传奇的色彩。顺着岸边走,运气好的话,你会遇到冰洞,里面是冰的世界,你无法形容你的感受,那简直就是一座天然的水晶宫。
沿着小路继续走,你会走进北方浓密的森林厚厚的雪早已这里造成了一座迷宫,矮灌木形成了各式各样的拱门、小伞、雪堡,高高的树木则形成了高大雪塔,除了松树,你还会看到碧绿地冬青,上面结着各色果实,才下来煮水泡手脚,可以驱冻伤。这时,你不必感到寂寞,雪地上有各种动物留下的脚印,像绽放的花朵,空气中不时传来风吹树木的嘎吱声,老人们说那是树木独有的语言,叨木冠子(就是啄木鸟)发出有节奏的梆梆梆。如果累了,你可以一躺,没膝的雪很快将你包裹着,冰凉,清新,等你站起身,不仅仅会留下人形,还会沾掉衣服上的灰尘,不必担心迷路,因为周围的小路总会曲径通幽、柳暗花明。运气好的时候,你会搭上进山拉烧柴的大爬犁,坐在上面,享受雪地飞驰的感觉,等你倦了,见到袅袅炊烟,那证明你到家了。那里有暖暖地火炕,热乎的大碴子,以及玉米面做的年火烧,吃饱了,你可以看朦胧的银河,闪烁的繁星,它们被雪搽的铮亮铮亮的,闪着幽幽的冷光,仿佛诉说着很多故事------
冬天的童话,童话的冬天,就那样静静地藏在那里,如果你想去,我很乐意告诉你,只是你去的时候不要吵醒它------
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn\'t afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people\'s clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn\'t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can\'t provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
四级英语很快就要到来了,英语是占据重要的部分,快来看看下面的范文及写作指导吧。
下面请看一篇漫画式命题的作文预测题:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should express your views on the impact of air pollution. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【参考模板范文】
The Impact of Air Pollution
The cartoon vividly reveals the phenomenon of air pollution or the decline of air quality. In the cartoon we can see the air pollution is so serious that the earth can't bear it.
What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Possible reasons can be listed as follows: firstly, vehicle exhaust gases could be one of the most leading causes. With the improvement of economy and people's living standard, urban inhabitants in mounting numbers own their private cars. More automobiles will inevitably generate more exhaust gases. Additionally, household appliances widely used in cities also release a great amount of carbon dioxide gases, which further intensifies air pollution. Last but not least, many factories around the cities emit large quantities of untreated poisonous gases, which should also be responsible for the decline of air quality.
Definitely, air pollution will exert a detrimental impact on many aspects of people's life. For example, many diseases such as cough, skin problem and lung cancer are caused by it. Perhaps it is high time that we should adopt some measures to solve the problem of air pollution.
英语漫画作文写作指导
第一、读图审题
四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。此外,在本次四级考试的三道写作题中,Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面笔者就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
第二、谋篇布局
在把握文章的主旨之后,考生就可以构思整篇文章的架构了。四级漫画作文的写作可以分为下面三个段落。
第一段:开门见山,简要描述一下漫画内容,并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意,是手段而不是目的,所以描述要简洁明快,一般来说一句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是,写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述,因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。
第二段:表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的重心所在。比如,就第一道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。
第三段:指出漫画的寓意对大学生的教育意义,或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是,结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析,其主要作用是总结和升华,使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要,点到即止。
第三、论证方法
漫画作文的\'第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的核心段落,也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此,考生在这一段要浓墨重彩,写深、写透。在写这一段时,考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理,避免空泛的议论。针对这一核心段落,笔者在此推荐以下三种展开议论的常用方法,希望对考生有所启发。
1.条分缕析
在写作第二段时,考生可以从2~3个方面对观点展开论述,这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如,本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性,考生就可以从以下两个方面展开:第一,相对于电子媒体,文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面的范文。
There wasa time when children could relish (欣赏/ 也可以使用appreciate 替换 literature. But childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading?” some ask. The reasonis obvious: It enriches our imagination. When we read apiece of literature, we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition, literature is the mirror of society,whether it be poetry, drama or fiction. We know thesociety better through literature.
2.举例论证
如果漫画所传达的是抽象的人生哲理,那么考生在论述时最好能举出具体的事例,尽量避免空洞的说教。比如,就本次四级作文第二道题目而言,考生可以在第二段中举出一些成功人士如何从小事做起的例子。笔者下面提供的范文中用到的是哈兰·桑德斯上校从一个小吃店做起,最后缔造出遍布全球的肯德基快餐帝国的例子,用以证明只有从小事做起,才能成就大事。请看下面的范文。
Everything is smallbefore it is big. A good example is KFC. In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders beganserving food to his service station customers in Corbin, a city in Kentucky. He fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there. From the small roadside eatery, he went on to build an empire of fast food.
3.类比论证
如果漫画中的寓意不容易通过具体的事例来证明,那么考生还可以使用类比论证的方法,即通过打比方来论证一个抽象的道理。比如,对于本次四级作文的第三道题目,考生可以在第二段中用学习打篮球的过程来打比方。学习打篮球时,只有先学会了投球、运球、传球这些基本技能,才能进一步学习高难度的技能。以此类推,无论做任何事情,只有掌握了基本的技能,才可能取得更大的成功。此外,考生还可以举出统计数字,用具体的研究结果来证明论点。请看下面的范文。
Simple as they mayseem, basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. Thisis analogous to learning to play basketball. If shooting, dribbling and passing are not mastered,learning advanced skills will become difficult, if notimpossible. A growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading, writing and computing are highlycorrelated with success later in life. A 2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs ofFortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
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