所谓议论文,最关键之处在于论述得当。支持句应使主题句更加令人信服,令考生的想法更加鲜明的呈现在考官面前。然而,中国考生在论述时往往存在一些误区:
虽然来源于身边社会,但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮,拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到,只需要把事件中某一个具体的你,我,他,变成是客观群体,比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。
举例的常见表达方式:
for example,/for instance,(后加句子)
Such as/ like (后加词组)
Take... as an example,
A case in point is that......
其次,在举例时还应注意尺度。
1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称,为了加强客观性,应将人称写成第三人称。
改正:Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.(那些养宠物,例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感)
2. 应避免引用一项调查研究,并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉,用含糊的方法表示。
改正:There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. (大量证据表明。。。)
3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家,尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。
改正:Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.(在全世界,许多孩子在屏幕前待太久,导致了他们的视力减弱。
“全世界”的表达方式:around the world, all over the world, across the globe
【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.
**临床医学院领导:
您好!很高兴有这个机会推荐我的学生**同学申请贵院临床药学方向免试推荐研究生!
该生参加了一个创新性实验课题“**”,我是此项课题的指导老师,一年中关于实验方案制定、实施中的问题、数据的处理等,不断接触她并有了深入的了解。
实验方案确定过程中,我通过认识并逐步了解了她,通过平时对她的.观察及与她的交流,对她有较深的了解。从课堂情况来看,该生上课准时,并总是坐在前排(这也是我及早认识她的原因之一,听讲认真,积极参与课堂互动,课后主动与我进行讨论,表现出了很高的热情和积极的学习态度。通过我的观察和了解,我认为该生该生最大的优点是踏实勤奋,而且细心认真,这也是作为科研工作者必不可少的素质。在我授课的四个班学生中,该生的科研愿望、动手能力和综合素质都属于突出之列。
根据教务处实验管理系统的记录,我发现该生曾经多次参与过学校组织的开放性实验项目,如“***********”等,且在实验过程中表现优异,受到了指导老师的一致认可。该生连续两年参加了我校大学生创新项目。她今年的研究课题是“**************”, 在她请求我写推荐信后,我与该项目的指导老师进行了交流,得知该生不仅专业知识扎实,动手能力强,而且善于分析和解决问题,具有较强的组织能力。
综上所述,***同学是一个善于沟通、为人热心、学习成绩优异、实验经历丰富的好学生,她具有良好的协调能力和团队协作精神,具备良好的培养潜力。我认为她完全符合贵校的要求,因此,我愿意推荐该生参加有机所的夏令营活动,相信经过这次夏令营活动,她会有更大的进步与提升。谢谢!
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
Some people believe (argue, recognize, thinkthat
观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that
观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all,
论据1. More importantly,
论据2. Most important of all,
论据3. In summary, 总结观点。 As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
作为**大学**学院一名教授,本人很高兴推荐**同学参加贵所的学术夏令营及之后的推免生复试。
本人在教授课程及指导该生实验的过程中,发现该生有扎实的专业知识,并能灵活运用所学的基本理论和基础知识。自学能力强,反应敏捷,善于接受新生事物,动手能力、实验技能不错。
可以看出,该生综合表现突出,对科研有浓厚兴趣,并逐渐获得了科研的素质与能力,有相当好的科研潜质,故推荐到贵所,望审核通过。
写作我也一直不差,因为以前背过新概念的一些文章。雅思的其实想要提高也不是难事,我买了一本《雅思万能八分作文》,还不错,里面有很多句子值得借鉴;然后我看了一些从3G上下载的范文,又从里面挑了一些句子和表达;在最后一天的时候,把我挑的句子和表达都罗列在一起,大概也就50条左右,我背了一下,接着就计时练了一次,结果在规定时间内直接写超了,TASK1写了200多,TASK2写了350,当时把我吓了一跳,因为我怕考试的时候按这样的思路写这么多时间会不够。所以在考试的时候,我写的比较慢,控制好节奏,每句话都是想好了再下笔的,最后字数差不多。
建议:1,一定要看一定数目的
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