未来的科技馆,将是非常高科技的那种:它座落于海底,被各种美丽的海底生物所围绕,十分美丽壮观。
未来的科技馆,是海星的形状,里面养着带鱼、海豚、海龟、翻车鱼等各种各样你很少能够见到的珍奇海洋生物。
未来的科技馆分为三层:一楼是3D电视体验区;二楼是高技术产品展示区;三楼则是开放空间。
3D电视,顾名思义,就是那种可以呈现三维立体影像的电视。人们无需戴特质的眼镜,只需凭肉眼即可观看上面的电视节目,而且几乎没有辐射。在观看过程中,你将体验到一种身临其境的震撼视觉享受。
另外还有一种“自动整理书包”,能够按照主人所学课程以及书的大小、厚度来帮助整理,还能替主人做一些简单上课笔记的整理。
到了这儿,相信大家内心会有一种疑惑:既然科技馆在海底,那么我们该怎样前往呢?又应该靠什么在水下呼吸呢?不必担心,因为到了那时,“呼吸糖果”和“海底衣”早已经被发明出来了。“呼吸糖果”是一种吃了之后能自由在水下呼吸的糖果,足够维持人一天的需氧量;“海底衣”则能够帮助人克服水下压力的困扰,确保人可以在水下自由活动,就跟我们平时所穿的衣服一样。
亲,你们喜欢这样的海底科技馆吗?喜欢的话,别忘了届时随我一同前去探秘哟!
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
未来的住宅很特别,你住在那舒适的豪华住宅里,不用为做家务活而烦恼,那些做饭、洗衣服等事情都是让神奇的机器人为你做的。
早晨,机器人就像一只小闹钟一样,在你所说的时间准确无误地把你叫醒。吃完早饭,你可以到住宅内那美丽的院子里,欣赏美丽的景色、散散心。
中午到了,服务机器人为你安排好桌椅。厨师机器人会为你端上美味的菜肴,可以让你大饱口福。午饭过后,服务机器人就会为你准备舒适的沙发。坐在上面,你就会感到屁股底下有一层薄薄的海绵,你可以尽情地玩电脑、看电脑,也可以痛痛快快地淋一个舒服的热水澡,好舒服啊!
时间过得飞快,转眼间,
又到了晚上。厨师机器人就会“甩”出新招儿:古香古色的“五电脑粥”。“五电脑”指的是:猪肉、银耳、皮蛋等,五颜六色,会让你忍不住吃上一口。
睡觉时间到了,两位服务机器人会为你准备好“弹力海绵床”和“松软弹簧被”,让你好好地睡上一觉。
未来的住宅会让你的每一天都过得很美好。你喜欢未来的住宅吗?
导入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
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