英语作文中考怎么使用灭火器【一】
我敬佩的人有与病魔斗争的医生、护士；维护治安的警察叔叔，和舍己救人的消防官兵叔叔。其中我最敬佩消防官兵叔叔。
记得有一天，一所工厂起火，消防官兵冒着浓烟，冒着烈火，匍匐前进。一位官兵上身已经着火了，但他依然快速地小跑着，直到把伤者全部救出，他才扑灭身上的火苗。之后，他们拿着水枪，向工厂扫射，他们哪怕是要向前一厘米都很难。可是，经过大家坚持不懈地努力，最后扑灭了这场大火。就当大家快快乐乐准备离开时，从工厂里传来了一阵隐隐约约的哭声。一位官兵不顾大家劝阻，硬要去救人，大家拦不住，只好让他去了。
当那位官兵再次回到工厂时，四周全部的是一片黑色，天好像是灰的。但这并不能阻止他要救人的情绪。“是谁发出来的呢？”他想。
最后，在一栋摇摇欲坠的围墙旁边，有一位受了重伤的女青年。消防官兵二话不说，背起女青年，将她带离了工厂……
消防官兵叔叔出生入死、奋勇当先、忘我奉献的精神值得我们学习。我要学习他们，长大以后，做这样的人！
英语作文中考怎么使用灭火器【二】
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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
英语作文中考怎么使用灭火器【三】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
英语作文中考怎么使用灭火器【四】
“哎，真无聊啊！”微弱的灯光里传来一丝叹息，原来是一座油光锃亮，栩栩如生的大根雕。“喂，灭火器，你陪我说说话！”大根雕把目光看向了不远处的灭火器。
灭火器没有理会大根雕，而是打了个哈欠，然后用它那有些酸涩的眼睛继续扫视着四周。
“喂，灭火器，你怎么能这么无礼？”从来没有受过冷落的大根雕显然有些生气了，“我可是博物馆里最珍贵的'宝物，大家都对我青睐有加，你……你……你怎么能这样对我？你知道我的价值吗？”
“我没有对你无礼，我只是在做自己的工作而已！你的价值我不关心，我只关心你的安全！”说完，灭火器又继续用它那已经酸涩的眼睛扫视着四周。
“哎，真无聊啊！”见灭火器不理自己，大根雕只好一边叹息一边昏昏欲睡了。
“滴……滴……滴……”突然，一阵急促的警报声划破夜的宁静，不一会儿，安静的博物馆里便浓烟滚滚起来。
“咳……咳……灭火器，着火了，怎么办？我这么珍贵，我可不想被烧成大黑炭，不想，不想！”说着，大根雕呜呜地哭了起来。
“别哭，别哭！只要有人来，我们灭火器就能发挥作用，说不定很快就能把火灭了。”灭火器一边安慰大根雕，一边焦急地等待着。
不一会儿，消防队员就赶来了，他们冲进博物馆之后，立刻拿起灭火器救起火来。火很快就被扑灭了，大根雕不好意思地对灭火器说：“灭火器，谢谢你救了我。灭火器，你能原谅我吗？我刚才那样对你，真是太无礼了！”
灭火器微微一笑，说：“没关系，没关系！你是价值连城的大根雕，我只是默默无闻的灭火器，你怎么能让我原谅你呢？”
“我知道自己的错了，每件物品都有自己的价值，我不该自私自大嘲笑你。白天，我是骄傲的大根雕，晚上，你就是骄傲的灭火器！”大根雕说着，不由得把头低了下来。
从此，大根雕和灭火器成了最好的朋友，白天，大根雕向人们展示着自己的价值，晚上，灭火器就执行着自己的任务。每到夜深的时候，他们还会相互说起自己的故事，听，他们的故事开始了……
英语作文中考怎么使用灭火器【五】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
英语作文中考怎么使用灭火器【六】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
