一年一度的冬季淘宝节在我们的期待中终于来了。同学们个个欢呼跃雀,早已迫不及待了。
淘宝节这天,同学们带着自己各种将要出售的“宝贝”和激动心情来到学校。整个上午,校园弥漫着浓浓的欢乐气息!一到下午,全校同学集中在操场上。随着校长的一声:“淘宝节开始!”整个操场顿时沸腾起来。
我来到六年级的班淘宝,他们的“宝贝”真多啊,琳琅满目,我早已眼花缭乱了,突然我被一本书的封面吸引住了,拿起来一看,这不是我期待已久的那本《那些稀奇古怪的物种》吗?终于找到了,我兴奋不已,连忙问:“同学,这本书怎么卖?”“这本原价20多元,看你这么喜欢给你打个折,10元。”我一听立马付了钱给他。我拿着心爱的书,来到放着很多玩具的桌旁,我发现了一个挂件,是个小黄人,超级可爱,我买了下来。之后我又淘了两本书,《让孩子爱上科学的动物书》和《希腊神话故事》。淘完以后,我打开钱包,发现里面空空如也,这时我才依依不舍地回到教室。
这次淘宝节,我们收获很大,老师说要把所有淘宝赚来的钱捐助给灾区的孩子们,我们拍手欢呼,老师们也露出了灿烂的笑容。这些都是我们努力的成果!
这真是一次有意义的淘宝节啊!它让我们学会了团结,学会了分享,学会了感恩……
当飞鸟划过天际,低声啼鸣,又是一年结束。花开花落,细水长流,回首展望2**的日历,那里写满了酸甜苦辣的事儿。淘宝节这盏醒目灯吸引了我。
每年的最后一天,我校都会举办一场盛大、欢乐的淘宝节,给冬季灰色的天空添上一抹亮色温暖。今年已经是第二届了,西宝小兔穿着红棉袄显得很精神,像冬季的一簇火光。与往年与众不同的是,今年是“军民共建淘宝节”,所以我们将与解放军大哥哥们一起度过。
操场上摆满了摊位,他们各个金光闪闪,耀眼夺目,颇有几分生气。每个摊上都摆满了东西:毛绒玩具、玩具赛车、青少年图书、小饰品……
“我宣布,西小南区第二节淘宝节开始!”随着这一语落下,礼花四射,同学们喊着整齐响亮的口号向属于自己班的摊位冲去:“淘宝,淘宝go,go,go,淘宝,淘宝go,go,go,yeah!”我来到我们班的指定区域,那个摊位叫“淘淘乐,乐淘淘”,读起来朗朗上口,又表达清楚了意思。有的同学自告奋勇来为班级做宣传,他们拿着喇叭大声喊道 “淘淘乐,乐陶陶,走过路过,千万不要错过”“机不可失,失不再来啊!”……功夫不负有心人,他们为我们班引来了很多顾客,在很短的时间内便换出了数件东西。
这时,我也按捺不住激动的心情了,拿着自己的玩具小熊猫和毛绒熊向别的摊位奔去。我东张西望,嗬!这里的东西还真不少,可谓是应有尽有。最终我将目光投向了一个名叫“聚宝盆”的摊位。走上前去细瞧,琳琅满目,有点让人眼花缭乱。那些东西总共分为:图书、玩具、饰品、文具几大类。我将所有物品都看了一遍,最终将目光落在了一个中型沙漏和一本名叫《追风筝的孩子》的书上,迫不及待的我赶紧找到了东西的主人问是否愿意交换,她看了看我的东西,默默思索了一阵,然后同意了。我欣喜若狂,接过东西后一蹦三尺高,大喊了一声:great!
夕阳西下,淘宝节在欢闹和交换中接近了尾声。曲终人散,但我的心却还沉浸在那份快乐中久久不能平静。我想,我永远也不会忘记六年里那最后一次愉快的淘宝节。
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Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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