Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student of our university, who often spend my spare time in our library. Generally speaking, our library provides quite good service. However, I still have some suggestions for you to upgrade the quality of your service.
To begin with, I would like you to prolong the open time. In the daytime, most students are having classes. To continue, some books are too old/ are out of date. It would be better if you could replace them with updated materials.
I sincerely hope to have a comfortable library. And I would be highly grateful if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
To Whom It May Concern,
I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time. Generally speaking, the services you offer here is quite good; however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt.
To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having class, so they can’t come to the library. Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines, we will be greatly honored.
I really wish to have a more comfortable library. I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind to take my suggestions into consideration. /Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
上千指令分毫不差
神舟十一号飞行任务中,景海鹏担任指令长。用他的话来说,“其实就是个牵头人,多操点心。”
景海鹏这样描述指令长的职责:“每天工作结束了,把完成情况写到日志上,并与地面指挥沟通等等。遇到紧急情况,我将代表乘组与地面进行沟通。这是指令长必须承担的责任。”
神舟九号飞行任务中,担任指令长的景海鹏不仅要确保成百上千个指令准确无误地发送,还要组织各类实验有序开展;不仅要严格执行飞行计划,还要调动大家的主观能动性,使大家高效愉快地在天宫一号中工作生活。
这次飞行的时间更长,在轨操作更多,人也少了一个,对乘组的身心素质、工作能力、任务规划等方面要求也更高。
老马识途。拥有丰富飞行的景海鹏,常在训练中对陈冬进行针对性指导以及实用的小建议,比如在失重环境下东西不能随意放、移动身体前必须先找好固定等等。
而“突击小测”更是包括陈冬、刘洋等搭档都领教过的“景式”训练手段:平时训练时,景海鹏会在对方毫无准备的情况下突然抛出问题,考考对方是否所有知识技能都扎实掌握。
陈冬也属马,比景海鹏小一轮。在他眼里,景海鹏是他的榜样,“能与之搭档非常幸运”。
景海鹏的细心周到,也让陈冬印象深刻——
一次演练,景海鹏早早戴好了压力服手套,戴得慢了些的陈冬“压力山大”。这个小细节被景海鹏看在眼里,记到心上。演练结束后,景海鹏悄悄告诉陈冬,以后一定会注意两人步调一致,防止给对方带来无形的压力。
景海鹏坦言,三度飞天的心情“一样,也不一样”。
“高兴激动的.心情都是一样的。但是毕竟经历过两次飞天的考验,经历过18年航天员生涯的磨砺,这次的心态更增加了一份平和、从容、淡定和坚定。”景海鹏说,“我们已经准备好了!请大家放心!”
四级英语很快就要到来了,英语是占据重要的部分,快来看看下面的范文及写作指导吧。
下面请看一篇漫画式命题的作文预测题:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should express your views on the impact of air pollution. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【参考模板范文】
The Impact of Air Pollution
The cartoon vividly reveals the phenomenon of air pollution or the decline of air quality. In the cartoon we can see the air pollution is so serious that the earth can't bear it.
What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Possible reasons can be listed as follows: firstly, vehicle exhaust gases could be one of the most leading causes. With the improvement of economy and people's living standard, urban inhabitants in mounting numbers own their private cars. More automobiles will inevitably generate more exhaust gases. Additionally, household appliances widely used in cities also release a great amount of carbon dioxide gases, which further intensifies air pollution. Last but not least, many factories around the cities emit large quantities of untreated poisonous gases, which should also be responsible for the decline of air quality.
Definitely, air pollution will exert a detrimental impact on many aspects of people's life. For example, many diseases such as cough, skin problem and lung cancer are caused by it. Perhaps it is high time that we should adopt some measures to solve the problem of air pollution.
英语漫画作文写作指导
第一、读图审题
四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。此外,在本次四级考试的三道写作题中,Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面笔者就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
第二、谋篇布局
在把握文章的主旨之后,考生就可以构思整篇文章的架构了。四级漫画作文的写作可以分为下面三个段落。
第一段:开门见山,简要描述一下漫画内容,并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意,是手段而不是目的,所以描述要简洁明快,一般来说一句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是,写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述,因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。
第二段:表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的重心所在。比如,就第一道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。
第三段:指出漫画的寓意对大学生的教育意义,或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是,结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析,其主要作用是总结和升华,使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要,点到即止。
第三、论证方法
漫画作文的'第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的核心段落,也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此,考生在这一段要浓墨重彩,写深、写透。在写这一段时,考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理,避免空泛的议论。针对这一核心段落,笔者在此推荐以下三种展开议论的常用方法,希望对考生有所启发。
1.条分缕析
在写作第二段时,考生可以从2~3个方面对观点展开论述,这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如,本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性,考生就可以从以下两个方面展开:第一,相对于电子媒体,文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面的范文。
There wasa time when children could relish (欣赏/ 也可以使用appreciate 替换 literature. But childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading?” some ask. The reasonis obvious: It enriches our imagination. When we read apiece of literature, we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition, literature is the mirror of society,whether it be poetry, drama or fiction. We know thesociety better through literature.
2.举例论证
如果漫画所传达的是抽象的人生哲理,那么考生在论述时最好能举出具体的事例,尽量避免空洞的说教。比如,就本次四级作文第二道题目而言,考生可以在第二段中举出一些成功人士如何从小事做起的例子。笔者下面提供的范文中用到的是哈兰·桑德斯上校从一个小吃店做起,最后缔造出遍布全球的肯德基快餐帝国的例子,用以证明只有从小事做起,才能成就大事。请看下面的范文。
Everything is smallbefore it is big. A good example is KFC. In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders beganserving food to his service station customers in Corbin, a city in Kentucky. He fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there. From the small roadside eatery, he went on to build an empire of fast food.
3.类比论证
如果漫画中的寓意不容易通过具体的事例来证明,那么考生还可以使用类比论证的方法,即通过打比方来论证一个抽象的道理。比如,对于本次四级作文的第三道题目,考生可以在第二段中用学习打篮球的过程来打比方。学习打篮球时,只有先学会了投球、运球、传球这些基本技能,才能进一步学习高难度的技能。以此类推,无论做任何事情,只有掌握了基本的技能,才可能取得更大的成功。此外,考生还可以举出统计数字,用具体的研究结果来证明论点。请看下面的范文。
Simple as they mayseem, basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. Thisis analogous to learning to play basketball. If shooting, dribbling and passing are not mastered,learning advanced skills will become difficult, if notimpossible. A growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading, writing and computing are highlycorrelated with success later in life. A 2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs ofFortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.
景海鹏现为中国人民解放军航天员大队特级航天员,少将军衔。2008年和2012年,他分别执行了神舟七号和神舟九号载人飞行任务。
6年前,阳光帅气的河南人陈冬成为中国第二批航天员中的一员。这是他的第一次太空之旅,也是我国第二批航天员中首个飞天的男航天员。“这是我第一次执行航天飞行任务,我会珍惜在太空中的每一刻。”今年38岁的陈冬说。
对于与景海鹏一起执行任务,陈冬觉得很幸运。“在工作中,是我的老师,在生活中,是我的兄长,他工作非常认真,要求非常严格,经验非常丰富。”他说,“这次能与景海鹏师兄组成飞行乘组,我心里很踏实、非常有底气。”
按照计划,中国空间站将于2020年前后建成。“中国空间站是中国人的太空家园,是每一名航天员的梦想宿营地。”景海鹏说,“我期待着为空间站建设发展多作贡献。只要祖国需要,我坚决听从召唤。”
“我和陈冬已经做好各方面准备。”景海鹏说,他和陈冬将带着家人共同的梦想去执行任务,一定用尽善尽美的表现,向祖国交出一份优异的答卷。
见面会是在酒泉卫星发射中心问天阁举行的。处于三级医学隔离状态的航天员坐在一面巨大的国旗下、隔着一道玻璃墙回答了媒体的提问。17日凌晨,航天员将从这里出发前往航天发射场,踏上执行神舟十一号载人飞行任务的征程。
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