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I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
敬爱的.王老师:
光阴似箭,日月如梭,转眼间,六年过去了,我们小学即将毕业。将要离开培养了我们六年的母校,将要离开朝夕相处的同学,将要离开和蔼可亲的老师……此时,我的心中涌起了深深的怀念和依恋之情。
虽然您五年级才来接手我们,但是您给同学们留下了深深的印象。您还记得吗?五年级开学的第一天,同学们坐在教室里期待着新老师的老师到来。您走进教室,用《少林》这首歌介绍了自己,当时,同学们就认为这位老师是一位与众不同的老师。每当看到美食,就像起我们开美食节的日子仿佛就发生在昨天。有一天,您对我们说:”你们一定吃过许多好吃的,在这个星期,我们班要开一个美食节,大家都把自己喜欢的美食带来学校,让同学们尝一尝。“我们听后,齐声答道:”好。“那天,我们带来了美食,整个教室变得香气熏天,您还用手机帮我们照了相。您开美食节其实是为了让我们更好地写作文。
虽然我们才相处了2年,但在这2年里,是您让我们班的成绩拿得了第一;是您让我的写作水平有所提高;是您教会了我怎样写毛笔字 ……您好比大树,我们在您的树荫下茁壮成长;您好比妈妈,给了我们妈妈一样的关心和爱护。我们能有今天的好成绩,都是您的辛苦教育,都是您辛勤的汗水。
老师啊!谢谢您的关心,谢谢您的帮助,谢谢您教给我知识,谢谢您的无私奉献。千谢万谢都表达不了我对您的依依不舍。
祝您身体健康,工作顺利,天天开心!
爱您的学生:杨茜
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