英语作文如何画格子【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
英语作文如何画格子【二】
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
英语作文如何画格子【三】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
英语作文如何画格子【四】
当我知道沈培的饰演者是李承铉时，我以为他是男主，我在想为什么会是沈培？他和谭斌并不合适，合适不一定有爱情，不合适却不能永远走下去。在看到程睿敏的第一眼我就觉得他更适合谭斌，没错，有时候女人的直觉就是这么可怕。
好了，不是不喜欢李承铉，是不喜欢沈培这个角色，我总觉得他和谭斌的爱是场美丽的误会，最开始他误以为谭斌懂他的画，后来他从谭斌身上看到一些他心中“梦想”的光芒，可是他太幼稚了，在开始时任性的不管谭斌的压力，在出事后变的敏感，脆弱，富有攻击性，有句话写的特别好，世间的爱情往往不是一件事让人放手的，而是经历了更多平凡，世俗磨灭了爱情的火花，当然，沈培的家庭让他有一直活在梦里的权力，这只是少数人才可能拥有的。
再说程睿敏吧，我没看过原著，很抱歉，打算这几天去拜读，看大家说原著中程睿敏放弃了报复。电视剧却没有，在剧中如果我是谭斌，大概不会原谅他，程睿敏的确为谭斌做了很多，给了她最好的退路，可是如果没有他，谭斌自己也可以闯出一片天，你毁了我所有努力再给我一条出路，然后我要感激你吗？我要自责误解你了吗？在现实中，真的如果伤害过，疤痕会一直在，所以我更喜欢大家说的原著中那个放下的'程睿敏。
不是diss程睿敏，除了报复这件事，我真的对他从头喜欢到脚，我知道他是为了这个社会的经济发展，这没错，一个人可以为了大事去做什么，但这并不是爱情的借口，活着已经很不容易了，为什么仅剩的美好还要去理解，去体谅，去夹杂着事业？
还有Mini，最后的最后，让我心酸，在曈曈手术之后，她努力想和程睿敏复合，并不是多爱他，而是确信这个男人有担当，这个男人可以给女儿遮风挡雨，这是现实生活中绝大多数人的想法，年龄到了，人品不错，你俩合适，就在一起吧，可是多年之后呢，如果Mini真的和程睿敏在一起了，她的性格一定少不了争吵，那情急之下会不会对曈曈说"当初如果不是为了你我怎么会委屈我自己？"我坚信，这是现实中的常态，幸好，剧中的Mini选择了爱情，而那个男人，也很适合她，很有担当，最重要的，是他们彼此相爱。
其实仔细想想，这个世界上适合你的人真的很多，只要有共同话题，收入水平差不多，两个人相互磨合，一起打拼，适合你的人一抓一大把，课上我们真的要为了合适就在一起，就结婚生子吗？
明明是为了糖糖看的剧，却不知道怎么写谭斌，大概是把自己带入了吧，看别人清清楚楚，看自己糊里糊涂。
