一天晚上,我和爸爸决定一起来做手工——制作纸编小圆椅。
要做纸编小圆椅,首先要准备的材料是:一次性纸杯2个,白纸1张,美工刀、双面胶,大头针、棉花棒2根、剪刀。
要开始做了,我和爸爸做了一个简单的分工:爸爸负责做出基本框架,而负责做装饰圆椅的网格坐垫和一些很细小的椅背装饰材料。
首先,我先用美工刀在白纸上划出一些又细又长的白色纸条,用它来卷出一些小卷卷,再把各种各样的小卷卷组合成一朵大纸花,来装饰椅背;还有一部分长纸条用来编坐垫。不过,你可别放为裁纸是很容易的事,因为,这件事是很难做好的。先要量好尺寸,再用美工刀细心地裁,要做到长短一样,宽窄均匀。费了九牛二虎之力,裁好纸条后,我开始卷一些小卷卷。卷小卷卷的时候,得用左手的大拇指和食指拿住纸条的一端,然后再用右手的大拇指和中指紧紧捏住纸条的另一端,然后再开始卷,速度就快了。卷完纸条,我把他们扎成了大花,然后,我又象个小织布匠一样,把另一部分长纸条织成了纵横交错的网格,这就是装饰椅座的坐垫了。
这时候,我回头看看老爸,他已经把椅子的基本形状做出来了。我心想:咦,爸爸手上的活儿挺细,奇怪,男子汉还会“绣花”呢!于是,我不由自主地问:老爸,你完工了没?爸爸一边做,一边回答道:嗯,快了,不过还得用大头针把支撑四条椅腿的棉花棒固定一下。一会儿就会好的!只见他迅速地用大头针穿过椅子腿,并固定好,再把做的花安装到椅背上后,叫一声:好了!就捧着这把椅子一溜烟地跑出工作间,去给妈妈看了。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
今天晚上,我和爸爸妈妈在家里一起制作手工小兔子。
准备的材料有:喜糖盒、两个粉色的小毛球、红色的小棒、胶水、透明胶布、小珠子和剪刀。一切准备就绪后,我们开始制作小兔子了。首先,我和妈妈都觉得方方的`喜糖盒当作小兔子胖胖的身子最好不过了。接着,我们把两个粉色的小毛球用胶水分别粘在小兔子身体的前、后方,这样小兔子的头和尾巴就展现在我们面前了。而此时闪亮的小珠子则发挥了点缀的用途,它们嵌在小兔子的鼻子、脑门和尾巴处,显得特别可爱。然后,妈妈又把两根红色的小棒用透明胶布粘在小兔子头和身体的连接处,这就是小兔子长长的耳朵了。最后,我用蓝色的水笔给它画上了漂亮的衣服,再贴上几朵红色的小花做花纹。就这样,一只漂亮可爱的小兔子就大功告成啦!
看着我和爸爸妈妈一起制作手工小兔子,心里真是开心!
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那时的我,不过是个四五岁的小丫头。
那时的那盒手工串珠不过是一盒五边形的塑料盒里星星点点的小珠珠罢了。
太公牵着我的手,走过那个令我魂牵梦绕的橱窗。我的脚步停了下来,两只豆儿似的眼睛盯着那盒在强光灯下悄悄默默闪耀着的串珠,我咽着口水,憋着那句试图从喉咙里溜出的“我要”,凝视着那盒手工串珠。太公用他浑浊的双眼看着我,仿佛在读着我的心。过了一会儿,他说:“怎么啦?你想要那盒串珠是吗?”我看着他的双眼,他贝雷帽下的白发闪着光华,我脸红了,点了点头。“这还不好说,你下次来,太公给你买!”他笑着,露出了老烟枪标志性的黄黑的大门牙。我笑得拍起了手,好像我即将得到的,是天上眨巴着眼的星,温和圆润的月。回家的路上,我高兴极了,恨不得时间马上就快进到我和太公的下次相遇。
但之后的每次相遇都不合我意。
第二次见到太公时,太公已经无法走动了,他静静地半躺在藤椅上,盖着毛毯子,用那浑浊的双眼静静地看着我。当我小心翼翼地提起那盒我梦寐以求的串珠时,太公却像个没写作业的孩子,挠了挠头,笑着说:“哎呀,太公给忘了,你下次来,太公一定买给你!”我嘟着嘴,心里念叨着,这太公,都是大人了,还这么没诚信。心里是这样想的,但仍然很期待下一次的见面。第三次的见面到来了,我见到的太公已经躺在床上,不得动弹了,当我问起那盒手工串珠时,又是那句老台词。我别过头去,却没有发现,太公仍在用他浑浊的双眼看着我的小脸,浑浊的眼泪从满是皱纹的眼角悄悄流下,打湿了枕巾。
那是他最后一次看到我的面容了。我们去拜访过的.不久,他便在梦中悄然离世了。
我牵着爸爸的手,站在那个高高的棺木旁,脑袋里想的都是那盒串珠。太公直到过世都没有给我那盒手工串珠。
直到后来,我才渐渐读懂太公的苦心。为了不让我忘记他这个孤独、即死的老人,他把希望寄托在串珠上,他读到了我的渴望,他读到了,只要让我一直挂念着那盒手工串珠,就能一直记得来看他了。每每想到这里,惭愧之情都会涌上心头。太公年过九十,身旁已经没有儿女陪伴,更别提孙子们了,这样的孤独和悲伤,为什么我没有读懂他的心呢?为什么不珍惜他在的日子呢?
直到现在,我都没有拥有那盒手工串珠,也再也没有提过它。因为它一直在我的心里,是哪个满脸皱纹,满头闪亮白发,满嘴黑黄牙齿,会读心的老头递给我的。
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