Dear Mr. President,
My name is Li Ming, a sophomore majoring in International Trade. Having learned and lived on campus for nearly two years, I have found university life most exciting and instructive.
What happens around me every day has left a deep impression on me, but what strikes me most is the canteen service on campus, so that for some time I have had the keen desire to write to you, sharing with you my positive comments on and negative feelings about it. On the one hand, we are happy to see that the canteen staff has been sparing no efforts to guarantee food quality. As a result, we are relieved from the anxiety that some food might be dirty, stale and inedible. We also feel contented with the service provided by the canteen, enjoying food in a homely atmosphere. On the other hand, improvements should be made for the simple reason that prices for dishes are unreasonably high, and that the canteen is not spacious enough and too noisy at times.
Therefore, to improve the overall service of the canteen the strengths should be encouraged, while the weaknesses ought to be overcome by lowering prices and expanding the canteen if possible.
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the university president. You should write at least 120 words based on the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 学校教学应该注重学生学习方法的'培养。
2. 学校应该丰富学生的校园生活
A Letter to the University President
Dear Sir,
I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning our teaching and campus life.
As a sophomore from the Math Department, I am quite satisfied with the present condition of my university, but I餯 like to say that there is still some room for improvement.
First, I believe that more attention should be paid to the guidance of our study methods. To some extent, university students are capable of studying by themselves, but more often than never, we find ourselves at a loss as to choose good books to read and appropriate topics for our research. It is clear that we need some advice from our teachers. If our teachers can lecture more on how to learn by yourself for us, especially for the freshmen, our skills will be further improved.
Second, more activities should be conducted to make our campus life more colorful. I餸 sorry to say that the present life on campus is quite boring. Every day we have classes, read in the library, or stay in the dormitory. Life here is routine. We need more meaningful activities organized to enrich our college life and enable us to study more efficiently.
曾经,中国是自行车大国。近年来,这一灵活轻巧、低碳环保的交通工具又有了王者归来的架势。根据媒体报道,目前公共自行车在国内城市遍地开花,俘获民心无数。以北京为例,20xx年公共自行车平均周转率同比增长56%,单日最高骑行人数超过20万人次,创历史新高。
作为一项民生工程,公共自行车惠民便民,剑指出行最后一公里,将其称之为城市文明进步、民生改善的标志毫不过分。而在城市交通拥堵、大气污染严重的大背景下,低碳绿色出行更是被寄予厚望,被视为节能减排、呵护环境、缓解交通压力、倡导健康生活的重要举措。
有了这些光环萦绕,各地公共自行车项目纷纷提上日程,有的还写进了政府工作报告,立下军令状,可谓扬鞭奋蹄、大张旗鼓、风风火火。不过,项目落地之后不同城市的画风简直截然不同,有的`已经成为一道靓丽的风景,甚至跻身城市名片之列;有的则是掉链子,大把问题扑面而来。一方面是市民吐槽,从车辆少、租车难,站点设置不科学到管理、服务不到位等不一而足;另一方面则是运营困境,自行车使用率低再加上车霸、车辆损毁而连年亏损。
闹哪样?看上去很美的民心工程怎么会闹心?应该说,自行车虽小,但涉及千头万绪,其中涉及的管理、技术、经营等尴尬也都需要换挡升级。
首先需要换观念,摒弃短视思维。目前,有些地方仍对公共自行车心存偏见这种项目投资巨大,并且涉及路权分配难题,在城市道路资源不足的情况下势必要劳神费力,因此一些地方、部门不舍得投入,不愿意改变。另一方面则是认识不清。公共自行车不是简单地一投了之,还涉及城市规划、配套设施、统筹协调、维护管理等问题,没有长远考量、科学规划,只是盲目单兵突进会埋下无穷后患。从案例来看,有些城市将公共自行车作为一锤子买卖,只重视前期宣传和投入,有了自行车就以为大业已成,最后一笔投资沦为摆设。
第二要提升管理,避免管理真空。公共自行车的投放数量、站点布局、租借流程、相关服务等,都考验着管理的智慧。针对市民吐槽的奇葩体验,不妨逐一反思,提升用户体验。另一方面自行车屡遭毒手甚至下落不明的问题也是很多城市的通病,在这方面要加大监管力度,制定可操作的管理规则,引入诚信机制、在停车点安装监控设施等,加强对公共自行车的监督管理。
第三,运营模式也可以继续探索。公共自行车姓公,有公益属性,但并不意味着必然入不敷出、一味依赖地方财政。比如杭州在经历连年亏损之后,尝试对自行车车身及服务点广告位进行拍卖,出让服务亭的经营权开展多种经营等,既保证了企业收入又减少财政负担,形成良性循环。而厦门也将面向社会开展公共自行车认捐活动,发动各界力量造血。这些尝试和努力,值得借鉴。
最后,还期待技术放大招。满足市民需求,使自行车出行真正常态化,这是项目实施的应有之义,而这也是一个不折不扣的技术活。一方面,不妨利用大数据分析来实现科学、精细化布点,普及微信、App扫码租车等,让自行车更加好借好还,提供更好的服务。另一方面,自行车本身也应该不断提升魅力。目前,一些城市提供亲子款自行车,有的则计划推出能测心率体重、边骑边供电、有GPS的聪明自行车,将租赁点与智能手机、可穿戴设备等连接想想看,这样的自行车会不会有更多人喜欢?
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Headmaster,
I am very glad to write to you. These days we are talking about how to make our school more beautiful. Here are some of my suggestions.
First, a library with a lot of interesting books in it should be built, so that we can read in our spare time every day. Second, we expect our own dancing hall and piano room. Many of us like dancing, and some are even good at playing the piano. Third, we dream of having a playing-field with many flowers and green trees around. We can exercise there every day to make our body strong. Finally, I suggest teachers in our school organize more colorful after-class activities for students.
In a word, I hope our school will attract more visitors and I wish her a good future.
Thanks for your reading!
Yours sincerely,
Liu Yu
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