四级作文关于中国【一】
Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
四级作文关于中国【二】
春天， 万物复苏，小河水哗哗地顺流而下； 活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱； 小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋，大地换上了绿色的新衣； 小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽； 一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童， 抽出嫩黄色的新芽；。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐， 吐出米粒大小的嫩叶， 就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。
夏天，太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色，枝条也向四周扩展了许多，变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时， 美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸，好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。
秋天，凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色，在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来， 给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟，我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹，甭提有多高兴了。
冬天，刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过，古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华，仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者，正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月， 并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习，成为对国家有贡献的人才。
这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。
四级作文关于中国【三】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级作文关于中国【四】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
四级作文关于中国【五】
我说胜春，你今天讲的确实精彩，这点不否定，而且呢，我追百慕大也追了很久了，不过让我无言的是，你们最后给我的答案是——百慕大天气很糟糕，所有的“神秘事件”都只是事故而已，都只是因为超雷暴、磁场或者电子雾所影响的区域性事故之后，我真的很不甘心。
我说胜春，我真的不太相信：你们说百慕大的事故都是天气所致，那么还有很多的事故未解剖，这么早就下结论？还是说你们又在哪里看到了什么科学家的强有力证据？我算得上是一个强烈的百慕大迷，我觉得，你们说的这些，有些不可思议。
这样说来，百慕大一点都不神秘，我就只能说：百慕大的天气可真够糟糕啊，去了N多飞机，N多轮船，N多人，每次都是遇到天气原因，每次都是因为天气事故，这可能吗？上千上万的'事故，都是天气原因？这样，百慕大天气不是也太糟了吗？
说实话，我不信服于这个答案。
网上还暂时没有下部，敬请期待，观后感《关于地理中国观后感》。
至于为什么不信，我想已够清楚。
网上看完了以前的纪录片追风而行，相比之下，我还是很喜欢这期节目的。讲述了很多的龙卷风知识，而且还讲述了怎样逃脱，还讲了龙卷风的一些内部数据，相比之下，我真的很欣慰。我喜欢龙卷风，从这期节目上了解到了很多的知识，谢谢你们。
四级作文关于中国【六】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
四级作文关于中国【七】
??于中国梦宝岛情征文“日月潭是我国台湾省最大的一个湖泊。那里青山环抱，树木葱茏，是个著名的风景区。”三年级的语文课上我学习了《日月潭的传说》，不仅崇敬大尖哥和水社姐牺牲自己、为民造福的精神，更对那里童话般的仙境悠然神往，从那时起，我就梦想有一天能到祖国的宝岛台湾去看一看，走一走。
在我的一再要求下，四年级暑假，我的梦想成真了，爸爸妈妈带着我去台湾旅游!虽然飞机只要两个小时的时间，我们就从禄口机场到达了台北桃源机场，可爸爸一再叮嘱我看好自己的《台湾通行证》，离开机场排了很长的队才办完进入台湾的手续，就像出国似的，跟我以前去北京、青岛、海南都不一样啊，看着我诧异的表情，同行的一位老爷爷告诉我，08年的时候他到台湾得先飞到香港，再换架飞机才可以呢，而且对大多数人来说到台湾旅游简直就是天方夜谭。为什么会这样呢?我有些纳闷。
第一天我们先去了台北故宫，虽然它没有北京故宫的宏伟气魄，但里面令我印象最深的是翠玉大白菜，上面绿，下面白，上面还有两只活灵活现的小昆虫，一只是螽斯，一只是蝗虫，是多子多福的.意思。在它旁边就是我最爱吃的“东坡肉”了，其实它只是一块石头，可它和真的东坡肉没什么两样，上面一层皮，中间一层肥肉，下面是瘦肉，油亮亮的非常像。看了这么多宝贝，我为我们灿烂的古代文明而自豪!
然后我们又来到了大名鼎鼎的日月潭，幽默风趣的“排骨船长”驾驶着观光船带我们在青山绿水中穿行。我站在船尾，看着那波光粼粼的湖面和那云雾缭绕的山峰，天上飞来的水鸟，迎面吹来的微风，感觉就象在仙境一样。在船上，我们还品尝了全地球中最有营养的、最入味的、最赞的茶叶蛋，因为它里面放了很多药材，茶叶是海拔1000米以上的高山茶，里面还放了大名鼎鼎的牛樟芝，所以非常的好吃。
到了台湾，不能不提到郑成功。在赤崁楼，我们看见一座雕像，郑成功昂首挺胸站在那里，一个荷兰人鞠着躬，连头也不敢抬，手里还捧着一封降书。听老爸说:民族英雄郑成功收复台湾后，荷兰人为了免死，只好投降。
后来我们又游览了宝岛的最南端--鹅銮鼻，景色如画的野柳公园等许多地方，士林夜市的芒果冰六合夜市的火鸡肉饭等让我大饱口福。
在花莲港口，我看到几位老爷爷，比我爷爷年龄还大些，爸爸说他们是台湾老兵，因为打了败仗就永远留在了台湾，其中一位山东口音很浓的老爷爷说起自己的家乡时热泪盈眶……
这次台湾之行，我虽然不知道“三通”和自由行的意义，也不懂爸爸说的“历经劫波兄弟在，相逢一笑泯恩仇”。我只是记得我小时候听过的一个故事，弟兄俩要分家，家里的紫荆花树枯萎了，当他们懂得了亲情的宝贵，重新和好时，枯死的大树又恢复了勃勃生机!
所以我有一个梦想，梦想我们以后到台湾像走亲戚一样方便，梦想这两个同胞兄弟携手同行，再也不用害怕大海里的风浪!
