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虫有很多种,个个都有名字:甲壳虫、七星瓢虫、毛毛虫等等。可是,今天我在语文书上看到了周月泉画家的一幅漫画。它,引起了我的深思……
木头李以卖树为生。一次,他穿着刚买树得来的钱,买了一套崭新的衣服,头顶鸭舌帽,瞪着铜铃般的眼睛仔细盯着树木。抽出一根香烟吸着,接着像模像样的试了试斧头的刀锋,握紧斧头,“刷刷”的砍了起来。突然, “扑扑”几声,一只啄木鸟停在了木头李的肩膀上,盯住了木头李的“不毛之地”,想:这段木头里一定有虫……
看完了之后,我笑了。但笑完之后心中久久不能平静。盗木人有榆木一样的脑袋真没错,因为他也不想想,毁坏树木资源就等于毁灭自己。人类的生存哪一样离得开自然资源的给予呢?
“这段木头里一定有虫……”这句话引起了我的思考,人的脑袋里真的会有虫?对,这条虫就是贪婪虫、无知虫、自私虫……为了金钱而生出来的虫!世界上,这类“脑袋有虫”的人数不胜数,可啄木鸟却是寥寥无几。我不由自主地想到了一个个触目惊心的数字:因为人类的活动,现在,全球森林面积从1990年的39.6亿公顷下降到2000年的38亿公顷,这都是人类不注意保护环境而造成的。如果人类将森林砍伐光了,陆地上的生物将减少90%,将有250万个生物物种灭绝。
如今我们必须保护我们这个美丽的地球,因为拯救地球就是拯救未来,而我们首先应该做的就是帮助像“木头李”一类的人,灭掉脑子里那条贪婪的虫。让我们能问心无愧的回答说:“我是保护环境的使者!”
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Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
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