四级作文如何练【一】
二年级时，我有幸被校舞蹈队选中，参加了舞蹈社团。第一次来到了舞蹈教室，见到学姐，她们漂亮的舞姿，像一只只美丽的蝴蝶，深深吸引了我！我十分羡慕，并下定决心，一定要赶上她们。
一只巨大的“拦路虎”出现在我们面前——基本功练习。刚开始的结果可想而知，无论怎么努力也做不到最好。看到和我们一起来学习跳舞的同学都压下去了，我难受得就像有无数个蚂蚁在心里爬着。汗流了出来，泪水也在眼眶里打转，我很想放弃，但是转念一想：我被老师挑中了，我就要努力学好舞蹈。
一次次的挑战，一次次的失败让我也成为了有漂亮的舞姿的“小蝴蝶”！功夫不负有心人，有一次，我被选中和好朋友一起参加舞蹈比赛。随着老师的节拍，一个动作一个动作的学了起来。每一个动作都具有难度，很有挑战性，不经过刻苦，认真模仿是学不会的。可是在钟老师细心的指导下，我们慢慢熟练，一天天进步着，大家觉得越跳越有自信。
到了比赛的那天，整个舞台的灯光都照在我们身上，全场的目光都聚集在我们身上，我的怀里就像揣着一只小兔，怦怦地跳个不停。音乐响起，一道道金光照在脸上，我们的脸上露出花一般的笑容，炯炯有神的大眼睛聚精会神的望着主席台！开心的我们超常发挥，取得了好成绩······
我爱舞蹈，因为它让我变得漂亮；我爱舞蹈，因为它让我充满自信；我爱舞蹈，因为它让我收获了成功······
我爱舞蹈，希望舞蹈能一直伴随着我成长。
四级作文如何练【二】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级作文如何练【三】
这学期，妈妈叫我去学跳舞，我到了星空舞蹈，报名时，田老师问我：“你学什么舞蹈”“拉丁舞”。“你原来学过名族舞我给你报名族舞”我闷闷不乐的去跳名族舞。
名族舞是一种基本功的练习。
教我们的老师。由于我横叉不过关。肖老师教我站在墙后面腿靠住墙往下压，肖老师就坐在你背上往下压。坚持50秒又坚持50秒。肖老师也不放过你。我又是跳舞那里最大的，我只好坚持。
就在昨天学跳舞，肖老师来了个大必***。肖老师叫我上前，睡在垫子上，两脚成青蛙往下压，我哭了。每个动作要坚持十秒钟，做完后再就是压竖叉，把一只脚伸直，在把一只脚放在头顶。在这个动作我不怕。我最怕的是抱腿，把一只手握着肖老师，肖老师先把腿成90°，在成180°，最后自己抱着，我大哭起来。全部做玩以后在换腿做。
肖老师对我说：“台上一分钟，台下十年功。要坚持，我相信你。”
我最后坚持下来了，我的腿软度越来越好，我要谢谢肖老师，每次我要放弃。肖老师总是鼓励我。
