火的好处和坏处英语作文五年级【一】
雪花飘呀飘，飘到了你的头上。就被误认为是头皮屑呢!雪还可以堆雪人，红红的鼻子，黑黑的眼睛真是可爱极了。大家可以来打雪仗，可以望着大雪纷飞、苍白的大地，显示它的美。
可是，有一首古诗是这样的：尽道丰年瑞，丰年事若何?长安有贫者，为瑞不宜多。是呀，在旧社会上还有这样的人啊。他们忍饥挨饿，连吃口饭都难。在这样的冰天雪地里，把庄稼都压着，岂不是不能维持生活了吗?那单薄的衣服，让他们就这一点一点的冻死，又能怎么办呢?
还有七老八十的老奶奶，看不见光明的盲人。又该怎么扫门前的雪呢?雪有它的好处，自然就有它的灾害。我希望全世界的'人们在下一次雪的来临时都应该是高兴的。
没有了忍饥挨饿的人了，只有那高高兴兴在雪地里玩耍的孩子。雪，其实就是这样奇怪的。
火的好处和坏处英语作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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火的好处和坏处英语作文五年级【三】
我突然听见旁边的岩缝里露出一个头对我说：“快进来，外面太亮了。”这个人全身穿着用树皮做的'衣服，全身长满了毛，比正常人壮很多……我听了他的话进去了。
我从阴暗的山洞里看到里面还有两个人冻得瑟瑟发抖（当时是冬天）洞里堆放着老鼠尸体，那个人说：“小兄弟饿不饿，要不吃点东西吧！”说着递了只死老鼠给我，我看见上面还有蛆在爬动，连忙摇头谢绝了，他看我不吃就拿了一只老鼠自己吃了，我看得直想呕吐。如果有火，他们就可以吃熟食了。
到了取水的时候，有一个人自己去取水，我也跟着他来到一条小溪边，我看见小溪里的水很浑浊，那人却不在意捧起水来喝，我心想要是烧开就好了。可惜没有火。
回到洞里，洞里的一个人已停止呼吸看来是冻死了，我想如果有火他一定不会冻死，可惜没有火。
突然，我听见外面发出一声惨叫，我急忙跑出去，那个在洞里的人按住我的肩膀示意我别出去，我在石缝中看到一群狼在刚刚打水回来的人身上撕咬，血浸湿了一篇土地，而我们没有能力反抗，哎……如果有火就好了。
咝……！的一声我回到了现实，我眼前仍然闪过无数穿越时的情景，我叹了叹气，“如果有火他们该多好呀！”
火的好处和坏处英语作文五年级【四】
我觉得电脑是我们学习中的好伙伴，电脑可以用来查资料，电脑可以用来看你最想了解的新闻，电脑可以用来写博文，发表你自己的文章，发表你自己的意见，和大家一起交流，还有电脑的键盘还能有助于你左右手的.配合能力。
我心目中的电脑并不是十全十美的，它也有缺陷，什么缺陷呢？
电脑虽好但是要劳逸结合，太多的接触电脑也不好，因为电脑有辐射，据说辐射对人体极其不利，而且电脑还对眼睛有损害，玩电脑多了，可就要带上“二饼”的哟！。
还有就是电脑游戏，有的同学玩电脑游戏简直都玩疯了，也不学习了，也不回家了，就在网吧一直玩，告诉那些爱玩电脑游戏的同学，电脑游戏不是不可以玩，要适当的玩，电脑游戏里面的人物都是虚拟的，不是真正的，比如：摩尔庄园、奥比岛、网娃......就是先勾引你到这个网站上玩，然后，就让你买什么米米卡、Q币.......买那些卡的钱，都投到网站里了，当然那个网站就赚钱了，好像就是这么一个过程。
我们现在是小学生，我觉得小学生要注重学习，玩游戏会占用太多的时间，会影响学习的。
电脑是让你学习里面有意义的东西，不仅仅是玩游戏，还要合理的利用电脑，这样你才会学到更多的知识。
火的好处和坏处英语作文五年级【五】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
