当我还是个小孩的时候,我很淘气,经常做一些使父母生气的.事。他们总是责备我,但是我从来不听他们的话。我觉得他们对我太严厉了。但是,有一天我改变了。我父母经常告诉我出门的时候要小心,但是我总觉得是他们过于担心了。在我乘坐公车回家的路上有一个红绿灯。那天,我走到十字路口的时候,变红灯了,但是没有车过马路。于是灯没变绿我就过马路了。正在这时候,一辆汽车快速向我冲过来,顿时我慌了,站在那里动也不动。幸运的是,司机紧急刹车了,而我也没有受伤。但是,我确实受到惊吓了。我不敢想象如果车没有及时停住的话会发生什么事情。我告诉父母这次经历,起初他们像往常一样责备我,而那一次我也知道错了。因此,我一句话也没说。他们意识到我受惊了,于是耐心安慰我。最后我才知道他们所说的和所做的都是为我好。从那以后,我更小心了也听父母的话了。
When I was a little child, I was so naughty that I always did something angry my parents. They always blamed to me, but I never listened to them. I thought they were too strict with me. But I changed in someday. My parents always told me to be careful when I went out. However, all I thought was they worried too much. On my way to take the bus home, there was a traffic light. That day, when I got to the cross road, the light was red, but there was no car crossed the road anymore. So I went across the road without the light turning to green. At this moment, a car rushed quickly towards me. I was suddenly scared, so that I couldn’t move but stood still. Luckily, the driver broke the car quickly and I did not get hurt. But I did scared. I couldn’t image what would happen if the car did not stop in time. I told my parents what I experienced. At first, they blamed me as usual and I knew I was wrong that time. Therefore, I did not say anything. They realized that I was frightened, so they comforted me patiently. I finally knew that all they said and done was good to me. After that, I was much more careful and I listened to my parents.
(l)通过题目,同学们可以看出对文章所写的内容有什么要求?(写一件事,必须是小事)
(2)理解什么叫小事。(不大的、平凡的、普通的事)
(l)指导选材:请同学们观看录像,看看发生在我们小主人公萌萌身边的小事,同时思考每段录像的主要内容和中心是什么,然后回答。
(2)教师小结:通过大家的观察、发言,我们明确了这次作文的写作范围,既可以写发生在学校里的小事,又可以写发生在家庭里的小事,还可以写发生在社会上的小事;不但可以写正面的,也就是好的方面的小事,还可以写反面的`,不好的事;能写自己亲身经历的小事,也能写你看到的、听到的小事,但需要注意的一点是同学们选择的材料一定要真实,希望同学们做到心中有事可说,有事想说,有事要说,有事敢说。
(3)讨论发言,开拓思路,指导选材。
(1)给学生5分钟的准备时间,运用教师教给大家的方法,把自己的一件小事口述下来。
(2)请学生说说自己的一件小事,大家一起评析。
How time flies!Im fifteen years now.During the long time,there was one thing that I will never forget.
The Spring Festival is our traditional festival.During the Spring Festival,people usually visit their friends and relatives.When I was 9 years old,my family took the bus to my grandparents to say Happy New Year to them.
In the bus,I had a good seat.At 7:30,the bus came to a village.A woman got on with a baby in her arms.At that time,there was no seat.But she must look after her baby carefully.She had to stand next to me.I wanted to stand up and let her sit down,but I was afraid of hearing the other people sayThat girl want to be praised.I looked around.Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping.Suddenly,a little boy behind me,stood up and made room for the woman.She said Thank you very much with a big smile.The boy smiled,too.When I told my cousin about it after that,he said The child is the father of a man. Im very ashamed.Why couldt I do the same thing as the little boy did?
From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who need help.If everyone makes a contribution to helping others,the world will become much more beautiful!
1.作文题目:记一件小事
2.选材范围:日常生活中的小事
3.习作要求:选材真实、内容具体、体现中心
我有一个室友经常在睡觉的时候说梦话。各种各样的事他都说。例如,昨晚,我睡不着。我阅读小说来让我的眼睛感到困倦。当我集中精神在故事上时,我听到他说:“你要多少钱?”听起来像是与人争论价格,我很奇怪,所以我问:“你醒了吗?你在说什么。没有回答。在那个时候,他又开始说了:“好吧,好吧。”这是我第一次听他说梦话,所以我很害怕也很难忘。
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