Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
游戏这个词语出现在人们眼中。很多人在一天的疲惫后回到家,压力无处发泄,可就在此时,出现了一种名为“游戏”的东西。人人都有好奇心,对待新鲜的事物,总是忍不住地一再去尝试。在一次次尝试中,一些人迷上这个名叫“游戏”的东西,但他们并没有在意,因为最开始,他们只是借助游戏,打发空闲时间,疏解工作学习时的压力。但在这种过程中,他们一步步的升级,发掘了游戏越来越多的有趣之处,他们就忍不住了,不满足于只在空闲时间玩,在上班,上学时也偷偷的拿出手机。他们不再满足于疏解压力的玩上一两句,而是沉迷其中,整日整夜的玩。到了此时,他们已经上瘾了,即使刻意的控制玩游戏的时间,但在做其他事情时也总是忍不住走神,忍不住去想游戏里有趣的事情。游戏的传播是迅速的,一个有趣的游戏,几乎只要有玩的条件的人都会去试试,所以沉迷于游戏的人变得越来越多。
沉迷游戏带来的危害,是巨大的。无数青少年被一些内容血腥暴力的游戏感染,频频做出大街上捅人的事,他们迷失在了游戏的时间,分不清现实与游戏世界,一次又一次做出不该有的行为。更有可怜的孩子,为了玩游戏没日没夜的通宵,广西有个十七岁的男孩,在网吧通宵一个星期,最后猝死在电脑前。如今,人们总算认识到了网游成瘾的危害,可是所有人都不知所措了。那么多人沉迷游戏,是谁的原因呢?是游戏开发商的错吗?创造出一款有趣的`,可以排解压力的游戏,他们有错吗?他们没有错,他们开发出如此吸引人的游戏,他们应该得到夸赞。那么是家长管教不够严厉吗?也不是。是学校管理的不够细致吗?更不是。我认为,是我们自己的错,我们自己没有严格把控玩游戏的时间,放任自己肆意的玩,才导致最后沉迷其中。
所以,在手游戒瘾上,我们自己一定要严格把关,不放任自己任意玩耍,控制好玩游戏的时长。但只有我们自己自控是不够了,有些人意志力不够坚定,就需要学校,家长和游戏开发商三者的配合。游戏开发商限制每个人每天玩游戏的时间,学校积极监督,家长监督孩子在家的作息时间,这样三者配合下,再加上自己的自控能力,我相信,一定可以戒掉网瘾。
手游戒瘾谁来把关?不光靠自己,更要靠家长,学校与游戏开发商三者配合,一同把关。
比如网络它会让我们的身心都沉浸上去;跳山羊它会让我们的身体受到伤害;斗鸡它会让我们摔跤,轻的会破皮,重的.可能会骨折。
网游它会让我们的心沉浸在网络的危害中,所以我们要主动去做一些事情——戒掉’网瘾‘。首先要主动避开,与其被电脑诱惑,不如主动把家里的电脑搬走;放学路过网吧,赶紧绕行;听到同学谈论网游就转身离开。另外转移注意力也很重要。
跳山羊的危害也很大,它会让我们的身体受到伤害,如:后脑勺。脖子等部位,要是你这里摔了,那里摔了,通的人可不是别人,而是你自己,我们班就发生过这种事情。九月二十六日,下午第三节课,讲台前面站了好多人,是怎么回事?原来都是跳山羊惹的祸,站在前面的同学一下课就去玩跳山羊,被老师发现了,全被狠狠地批评并保证以后在不玩跳山羊了。
斗鸡它会让我们摔跤,轻的会破皮,重的可能会骨折。父母可怖希望你们摔摔哪了,摔摔这里吧!父母可是希望你们健健康康的。
每一种游戏都有它的危害,每一种游戏都要控制的去玩,可不能沉浸在游戏里面啊!
The components that make up haze may have negative effect on people's health especially that of the children and the elderly. Also not excluded are those who have certain diseases such as asthma, allergy, and pneumonia and lung disease. Workers working in the open air have a high risk in their health.
组件构成烟雾可能对人们的健康有负面影响特别是儿童和老人。也不排除是某些疾病如哮喘、过敏、肺炎和肺部疾病。工人工作在露天有很高的.风险在他们的健康。
今天上音乐课的时候,我借张一诺《赛尔号》的书在课上看了一眼,结果被老师发现了。所以,我准备研究游戏对学生的危害。
{问题的猜想}
我觉得沉迷于游戏,会导致上课不听讲、不认真完成老师的'任务、学习的态度一塌糊涂。
{问题的解决}
首先我来谈谈危害。长时间玩电脑游戏对人的身产生危害,如视力下降,食欲减退,头昏脑晕;第二,长时间玩电脑游戏会影响人的注意力,占用学习时间;第三,沉迷于电脑游戏使人得不到正常的休息,打破了生活规律,有的学生迟到晚起,睡眠不足,上课时昏昏沉沉,无精打采。第四,有的游戏内容不健康,宣扬暴力和迷信等等,影响了青少年的思想健康。
{自己的想法}
看来游戏对我们小学生的危害这么大,大家可千万别玩游戏!
{我想说的话}
一定要控制自己,少玩电子游戏,但可以玩对自己有好处的游戏。也可以,运动、看书、画画开阔自己的心胸,让自己合理的安排时间。
希望大家能做一个文明的好学生!
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
Recently, the topic of air pollution has again aroused more and more attention since pollution haze, a kind of weather, has appeared increasing frequently in our cities. Just as the picture showed, when pollution haze comes, the whole city was covered with suspended particles which can breath into our body causing heavy problem to our health.
Due to the bad effect from pollution haze, a green and clear environment, rather than anything else, turns to be an important role and a urgent issue in our daily lives. Meanwhile we just live in only an earth, if we didn’t try to protect our common hometown, we would have no place to settle.
Thus, we should take effective measures to rebuild our beautiful environment of the cities from now on.
In my opinion, law and regulations should be enforced by the government and authorities to control the emission of polluting gas. To ourselves, we should enhance the awareness of environment protection and choose a green lifestyle to make contribution to our earth day from day
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