旅行的英语作文中考【一】
我是一只小小的幸福的蜗牛，每天在阳光中沐浴在雨水中洗礼。如果口渴了我就喝一点雨露如果饿了就吃一片绿叶累了就躲进我的壳里，这就是我的安逸生活。也许是安逸的生活体验不出人生的、吧，于是我决定出去闯荡，来一次大旅行。
我知道旅行的路是漫长的有可能是十天也有可能几个月甚至有可能我在半途中倒下，但我觉定的事是不轻易改变的，因为我喜欢冒险喜欢出去闯荡。于是我毅然决定了这次远行。陪伴我旅行的是我的壳也是我唯一的家。这是很有用的，它可以为我遮风避雨，也可以让我疲倦的身躯有个归宿。
清晨当一米阳光洒在我的身上，我便出发了。一路上我觉得空气格外清新，阳光照在树叶上发出耀眼的光芒显得格外刺眼。一阵微风拂过更觉心旷神怡。我缓慢的爬行着，但我似乎感觉不到半点倦意，可能是一路好风景好心情的缘故吧！不知不觉天快黑了，于是我停止了前进的步伐。我吃了几片绿叶喝了一点露珠于是美美的睡了。金乌西沉赤兔东升，不知过了多久我终于睁开了眼睛。哇！我被眼前的美景迷住了。只见皓洁的夜空中挂着一轮弯月，无数颗眨巴着眼睛的星星，草地上还有无数的萤火虫互相飞舞。我躺在绿色的草地上吹着凉爽的风完全陶醉其中。
新的一天开始了，已代表我新的旅行开始了。我依旧缓慢的爬行着，但我不会因此而放下我前进的脚步。烈日暴晒下，我在爬行；狂风暴雨我在爬行；道路崎岖，我在爬行。只为了心中的一个决定只为了寻求一份、，多少个日日夜夜多少风吹雨打我不曾放弃。我坚信有一天我一定会到达想去的目的地。
朋友！不要畏畏缩缩，哪怕你“爬得多慢”但始终要爬走，不要畏惧前路。抬头看看前面吧，路上夕阳正红！
旅行的英语作文中考【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
